RIDERS

ridersRiders by Veronica Rossi

Genre: Urban Fantasy – Young Adult

Series: Riders #1

Publisher: Tor (February 16,2016)

Author Information: Website | Twitter

Length: 384 pages

My Rating: 3 stars

Riders is a YA fantasy novel from Tor Teen which is set in our present world. The story revolving around mysterious creatures who might be angels or might be demons. The problem is that our protagonist Gideon Blake, eighteen year old U.S. Army Ranger, doesn’t know which is which. Actually, he doesn’t really know what is going on most of the time, because he discovers he might have died and been resurrected as one of the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse!

Wait, wait. I’m getting ahead of myself, because, as the book opens, we don’t know any of that. In fact, the beginning of the book is actually the end. Yeah, you read that right. Riders starts at the end. Gideon Blake waking up in an interrogation chamber, tied to a chair, gagged with his head covered and no idea where the hell he is at. And it is only through his conversations with his interrogator that the story begins to come into focus.

First, we discover that young Gideon has had a rough few years: his dad dying unexpectedly; the lose sending him into a downward spiral of trouble; and ultimately it causing him to join the military to straighten out his life. And it does. Or, at least, it had until a horrible training accident occurs. An accident which should have killed Gideon . . . but didn’t. Or did it? Gideon isn’t quite so sure.

After finding his way back home to California (ostensibly to stay with his mom while he recovers), the nagging belief that he actually died spurs Gideon into action. Well, that and a feeling that something mysterious is going on around him. And once a group of strange people show up at a party, speaking cryptic and exhibiting some bizarre powers, Gideon finds himself thrown together with a beautiful but frustratingly secretive girl who wants him to help her save humanity from an ancient evil which she herself barely understands.

From this setup the fun begins. Gideon and his companion journeying around to find others like him. The truth about his situation slowly coming into focus (though much of it is still in doubt even at the end); his fellow horsemen knowing more – and less – than himself; and the conclusion to this episode demanding a sequel as soon as possible.

One of the main things I found interesting about Riders was the structure of the narrative. Veronica Rossi doing a wonderful job using the “ending” as a jumping off point that immediately built tension and excitement from the first line. That coupled with Gideon himself telling the story through his first person responses to his “interrogator” was a clever and refreshing way to tell this sort of tale.

Another thing which set this book apart from other YA faire was the great characters, specifically how they actually speak and act like young adults. I mean, we can all agree there are YA books out there where the characters resemble thirty year olds rather than teenagers, right? Not that those books are bad, but it is really refreshing to read about people who fit their age. Gideon, in particular, was a fun narrator; his insecurities, his emotions, and his flaws amazingly realistic and entertaining.

Even though Gideon was the star of this show, I have to just go ahead and admit that the coolest thing about Riders was the horses. The four horsemen of the apocalypse have to have cool horses, right, and Veronica Rossi definitely gives them some. Each horse distinctly original, exhibiting their own individual badass powers, and gifted with a unique personality which slowly shines through.

After saying all those great things about the book, I’m sure many of you wonder why I only gave it three stars. Simply put, the reason is that too much of the time I kept wondering why Gideon was doing what he was doing. I mean, his acceptance of his “mysterious” fate seemed a little too easy and too quick, and his instantaneous decision to travel around with a complete stranger (No matter how attracted he is to her.) was a bit of a head scratcher. Plus, it seemed a bit silly that he never really understands what the hell is going on – even when he begins training to fight “demons.” All of these things really detracted from my enjoyment of the story.

Overall, Riders was a fun YA fantasy book. It definitely isn’t your typical angels versus demons story, and Gideon is a really entertaining protagonist. While I can’t say it reinvented the YA wheel, Veronica Rossi entertained me enough that I will be picking up book two to see where she goes from here.

I received this book from the publisher in exchange for a fair and honest review. I’d like to thank them for allowing me to receive this review copy and inform everyone that the review you have read is my opinion alone.

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TOP TEN TUESDAY

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Welcome to Top Ten Tuesday! This is a weekly feature hosted by The Broke and the Bookish, where a new top ten list hits the web every week!

This week our topic is …

TEN BOOKS I ENJOYED THAT WEREN’T MY TYPICAL KIND OF BOOK

THE FALL OF FAIR ISLE10. The Fall of Fair Isle by Rowena Cory Daniells

I read this book in 2015,and while it is definitely a fantasy, I’m including it on this list, because it is a different type of fantasy than what I usually read.  Specifically I’d label this more along the lines of romantic fantasy.  And for that type of tale, The Fall of Fair Isle was a good read, filled with world building and more than enough characterization and romantic triangle dynamics to keep me turning the pages.  I won’t go so far as to say the story turned me into a fan of this sub-genre, but I definitely didn’t mind visiting.

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riders9. Riders by Veronica Rossi

This is a Young Adult novel which has an engaging and compelling story.  It also has something many YA stories are missing: characters who actually act and sound like they are young adults.  I mean, let’s be honest and just admit a lot of the YA faire out there has teenagers acting and speaking like they are thirty or forty year old adult.  Sure, you can enjoy the story anyway, but why do that when there is a compelling fantasy about true-to-life eighteen year olds, who also happen to be the physical representations of the four horsemen of the apocalypse.  Yeah, that’s right — the four horsemen of the apocalypse.  Read it and see where it takes you.

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Pageflex Persona [document: PRS0000037_00021]8. King of the Bastards by Brian Keene & Steven Shrewsbury

Sword and sorcery is a fantasy genre which I’ve enjoyed in the past, but it isn’t one I read very often.  In fact, I can’t really recall the last time my reading journey took me into a good old-fashioned, politically incorrect, blood splattered,testosterone fantasies like King of the Bastards.  And that is too bad, because this book was immensely fun.  Not horrible deep, but really cool in that B movie kind of way.  Plus, it rekindled my desire to revisit old sword and sorcery favorites, because, let’s face it, reading is suppose to be just fun sometimes.

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gideon smith and the mask of the ripper7. Gideon Smith and the Mask of the Ripper   by David Barnett

Okay, sure, I dabble in steampunk stories every once in a while, but it isn’t that often.  And, yes, I did read Gideon Smith and the Mechanical Girl, yet I totally missed out on the second book in the series.  So it might seem strange I’m adding this novel to my list.  It really shouldn’t be though, because Gideon Smith and the Mask of the Ripper is what I like to think of as a vacation.  You know, I go somewhere out of the ordinary — like a steampunk Victorian England, where vampires, mechanical girls, and all sorts of wonderful contraptions are running amock.  Once there, I have a lot of fun, then go back home, wishing I could have stayed a bit longer.

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shards of heaven6. The Shards of Heaven by Michael Livingston

This opening salvo in an epic historical fantasy is tailored made for my tastes.  One, it is something a bit different than the fantasy faire I usually devour, because it actually is based on true history with real historical figures strutting around on stage.  Two, it stays true to the real history of the time, as hard as that is to believe.  And, three, it somehow mixes in enough fantastical elements to liven everything up.  All of which means that a history lover like myself (Long ago, I was actually received a major in ancient history from university.) found this a delectable morsel not to be missed.

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the iron ship5. The Iron Ship by K.M. McKinley  

Fantasy stories are like different amusement park rides.  Some are character focused; others are plot driven; while a few (like The Iron Ship) are world building thrillers. What the hell am I talking about, you ask?  Well, simply put, the star of the show here is the huge, fantastical world and its mysterious history.  Sure, there are lots of characters with multiple viewpoints steering this coaster down the tracks, but it is the scenery that ride is roaring through which really captures your attention, because it is just so damn interesting.  And that, my friend, is definitely a ride I like to take every now and again.

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LEVIATHAN WAKES4. Leviathan Wakes by James S.A. Corey

One turned in my reading the last few years has been less and less sci-fi.  Not sure why that is, but the numbers don’t lie: I’m reading more fantasy and less science fiction.  To rectify this I tried to pick out one of the most talked about scifi series out there to usher me back into the fold, so to speak.  And while Leviathan Awakes didn’t turn me into a fan of the Expanse series, I definitely enjoyed reading about a place where space ships and scientific talk took the place of dragons and magic.  Well, at least, for one book, anyway.

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romulus buckle 33. Romulus Buckle & the Luminiferous Aether  by Richard Ellis Preston Jr.

Now, before you say it, I admit this is another steampunk adventure series which I have read in the past, much like Gideon Smith a few wheel spins further up the list, but it also is a welcomed departure from the fantasy stories I consistently read.  Plus, it has zeppelins in it, brother.  Well, maybe, this one didn’t have too many pages dedicated to those amazing airships of yesteryear, but instead we have a Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea-type adventure story which is full of fun of swashbuckling.

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a song for no man's land2. A Song for No Man’s Land by Andy Remic

While I’ve been a frequent reader of Mr. Remic the last few years (The Iron WolvesThe White TowersThe Dragon Engine), none of those grimdark epics prepared me for this amazing genre blender of World War I action story and dark fantasy.  I just finished this emotional and brutal story last night, so it is still fresh in my mind.  And while I haven’t had time to write a proper review of it yet, I will tell you that this is an amazing story, which does an excellent job pulling your heart strings while also showing the true horrors of the Great War down in the trenches!

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AN APPRENTICE TO ELVES1. An Apprentice to Elves by Sarah Monette  & Elizabeth Bear

As strange and hard to believe as this may sound, this was one of only three fantasy novels which I read in the last year penned by female authors.  If you add in a few novellas I read, then the number goes up to five.  And the strange thing is that I never even noticed the absence of the female voices until a blogger friend of mine invited me to participate in a list regarding the best female authored fantasy books of 2015.  Then I was like “WTF!”  But as much I wanted to deny the truth, I couldn’t.  So I’m placing this fantasy extravaganza by the team of Monette and Bear at the top of my list, because it appears fantasy written by female authors wasn’t something I enjoyed very much in the past, but I did enjoy this novel immensely.

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FUN DAY MONDAY, OR THE BOOKS THAT WILL HELP ME SURVIVE THE WEEK AHEAD (February 22, 2016)

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The work week begins. I quickly slip into my business suit and head back into the office to save a few innocent people. But while I try to fool myself into being excited about the grind, deep down, I’m not, so I’m going to escape dreary reality by reading some great books.

Today, I find myself finishing off several books I’ve been reading for the last couple of weeks (The Muiread and Alcatraz) while trying to fit several novellas from my favorite fantasy series of the moment into the schedule.

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best left in the shadowsBest Left in the Shadows by Mark Gelineau Joe King

Genre: Fantasy

Series: Best Left in the Shadows #1

Publisher: Self Published (November 15, 2015)

Author Information: Website | Twitter

Length: 80 pages

A Highside girl. Beaten. Murdered. Her body found on a Lowside dock. A magistrate comes looking for answers. For justice.

Alys trades and sells secrets among the gangs and factions of Lowside. She is a daughter of the underworld. Bold. Cunning. Free. When an old lover asks for help, she agrees. For a price.

Together, they travel into the dark heart of the underworld in search of a killer.

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faith and moonlightFaith and Moonlight by Mark Gelineau Joe King

Genre: Fantasy

Series: Faith and Moonlight #1

Publisher: Self Published (December 15, 2015)

Author Information: Website | Twitter

Length: 104 pages

Roan and Kay are orphans.

A fire destroys their old life, but they have one chance to enter the School of Faith.

They are given one month to pass the entry trials, but as Roan excels and Kay fails, their devotion to each other is put to the test.

They swore they would face everything together, but when the stakes are losing the life they’ve always dreamed of, what will they do to stay together?

What won’t they do?

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broken bannersBroken Banners by Mark Gelineau Joe King

Genre: Fantasy

Series: A Reaper of Stone #2

Publisher: Self Published (February 15, 2016)

Author Information: Website | Twitter

Length:  90 pages

Slaughtered and left for crows, soldiers of the King’s Army lay dead in a field. A grim reminder: the king’s law ends at the gates of the capital.

Elinor fought for what she believed and now she is an outcast. No soldier will follow her. No officer will stand with her. Yet when she finds her brothers and sisters slaughtered, she cannot turn her back on them.

Long ago, they swore an oath. Not to the king, but to each other.

And woe to those who break that bond.

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Pageflex Persona [document: PRS0000446_00071]Skinshaper by Mark Gelineau Joe King

Genre: Fantasy/Horror

Series: Rend the Dark #2

Publisher: Self Published (March 15, 2015)

Author Information: Website | Twitter

Length: 48 pages

Barricades broken.

A mining town empty.

One survivor swings in a cage, waiting to die.

Ferran’s tattoos burn as horrors near. They should run. They should seek help. But to save a few, they must journey deeper into the heart of the nightmare to face an ancient foe.

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STACKING THE SHELVES, VOL. 17

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Stacking the Shelves over at Tynga’s Reviews is all about sharing the books you are adding to your shelves, whether it be physically or virtually. This means you can include books you buy in physical store or online, books you borrow from friends or the library, review books, gifts and of course ebooks!

This week the patron saint of readers took care of me as I was able to receive copies of some amazing novellas by the writing duo of Mark Gelineau and Joe King.

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best left in the shadowsBest Left in the Shadows by Mark Gelineau Joe King

Genre: Fantasy

Series: Best Left in the Shadows #1

Publisher: Self Published (November 15, 2015)

Author Information: Website | Twitter

Length: 80 pages

A Highside girl. Beaten. Murdered. Her body found on a Lowside dock. A magistrate comes looking for answers. For justice.

Alys trades and sells secrets among the gangs and factions of Lowside. She is a daughter of the underworld. Bold. Cunning. Free. When an old lover asks for help, she agrees. For a price.

Together, they travel into the dark heart of the underworld in search of a killer.

Purchase the novella at Amazon.

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faith and moonlightFaith and Moonlight by Mark Gelineau Joe King

Genre: Fantasy

Series: Faith and Moonlight #1

Publisher: Self Published (December 15, 2015)

Author Information: Website | Twitter

Length: 104 pages

Roan and Kay are orphans.

A fire destroys their old life, but they have one chance to enter the School of Faith.

They are given one month to pass the entry trials, but as Roan excels and Kay fails, their devotion to each other is put to the test.

They swore they would face everything together, but when the stakes are losing the life they’ve always dreamed of, what will they do to stay together?

What won’t they do?

Purchase the novella at Amazon.

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broken bannersBroken Banners by Mark Gelineau Joe King

Genre: Fantasy

Series: A Reaper of Stone #2

Publisher: Self Published (February 15, 2016)

Author Information: Website | Twitter

Length:  90 pages

Slaughtered and left for crows, soldiers of the King’s Army lay dead in a field. A grim reminder: the king’s law ends at the gates of the capital.

Elinor fought for what she believed and now she is an outcast. No soldier will follow her. No officer will stand with her. Yet when she finds her brothers and sisters slaughtered, she cannot turn her back on them.

Long ago, they swore an oath. Not to the king, but to each other.

And woe to those who break that bond.

Purchase the novella at Amazon.

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Pageflex Persona [document: PRS0000446_00071]Skinshaper by Mark Gelineau Joe King

Genre: Fantasy/Horror

Series: Rend the Dark #2

Publisher: Self Published (March 15, 2015)

Author Information: Website | Twitter

Length: 48 pages

Barricades broken.

A mining town empty.

One survivor swings in a cage, waiting to die.

Ferran’s tattoos burn as horrors near. They should run. They should seek help. But to save a few, they must journey deeper into the heart of the nightmare to face an ancient foe.

Purchase the novella at Amazon.

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INTERVIEW WITH D.P. PRIOR

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D.P. Prior has been thrilling fantasy lovers for several years now with his numerous self-published series.  Whether it be the angst-ridden warrior-monk Deacon Shader, the axe-wielding Nameless Dwarf, or the half-human, half-Husk Jebediah Skayne, Mr. Prior’s characters burst off the page, carrying the torch of sword and sorcery torch to this generation in the tradition of Conan the Barbarian, Elric of Melnibon, and Fafhrd and the Gray Mouser.

Hi, Mr. Prior, thanks for taking the time to answer a few questions.  

As a veteran of self-publishing, you have several series under your belt already; could you tell everyone a little about them.

My first series, Shader, is a sprawling epic that spans two worlds, both of which are under threat from an exiled scientist who has developed a way to unmake everything there is just so he can begin a new creation in his own image. All he lacks is the power source, which comes in the form of an ancient artifact that has been broken into five pieces to evade his detection.

The main character, Deacon Shader, has been prepared for this scenario since the age of seven. As an adult, he is drawn to a life of prayer, but he’s also the deadliest warrior of his generation. If he’s to have any chance of fulfilling the task he’s been groomed for, he must integrate both aspects of his nature.

My second series was a spin-off from Shader. It began with a short story called The Ant-Man of Malfen, which was later developed into the novella A Dwarf With No Name. It was followed by three more novellas and a novel, which became known collectively as The Chronicles of the Nameless Dwarf. I later released them in an omnibus edition called The Nameless Dwarf: The Complete Chronicles, which has consistently been my bestselling book.

Recently, after discussion with my agent, and in response to reader emails, I decided write a complete Nameless Dwarf story arc, beginning with his origins and then taking the tale beyond the events of The Complete Chronicles. This led to the latest series, Legends of the Nameless Dwarf.

Do you agree or disagree with those who label your books as sword and sorcery? Was your writing influenced by any sword and sorcery writers from the past?

I have no issue with my books being labeled Sword and Sorcery, with one provision: they also owe a huge debt to the epic style of Stephen R, Donaldson, the heroic fantasy of David Gemmell, and the grimdark of Joe Abercrombie. None of the influences are dominant any longer, but at various stages, these writers have nudged me in one direction or another.

Maybe Neo-Sword and Sorcery would be more accurate, a blending of the old with a more modern approach to characterization, and use of tight point of view.

Sword and Sorcery undoubtedly influenced me early on. I grew up reading Conan, Elric, Kull, Solomon Kane, Corum, Fafhrd and the Gray Mouser, and these books still capture for me the essence of the kind of fantasy I want to read. Obviously, the genre has grown more sophisticated in some respects, and certainly more naturalistic (I’m still undecided as to whether that’s a good thing).

When I describe my books to others, I usually label them Heroic Fantasy, in large part because I retain a thread of morality wherein, no matter how blurred they get during a story, good ultimately triumphs over evil, but always at an enormous cost.

Shader is one of my favorite self-published fantasy series out there. What was the inspiration for the main character and the series? How did it change from original concept to completion? Your favorite character?

It’s so long since I first started writing Shader that it’s hard to remember. Definitely, there was a huge Solomon Kane influence, only the original Shader was Catholic, not a Puritan. Later on, references to real world religion were dropped on the advice of an editor, who felt there was no place for such things in fantasy. He may not have read Solomon Kane or Stephen King’s The Dark Tower (which I’ve finally gotten round to reading this week, having once had Shader compared to The Gunslinger in an early review by Journal of Always’ Robert. J. Duperre).sword of the archon

The ideas that eventually became The Resurrection of Deacon Shader first started to take shape in a novel (unfinished) called The Trials of Ignatius Grymm. Trials was told from the poi
nt of view of Ignatius Grymm’s squire, while the two of them basically went from village to village burning witches.

I moved to Australia for a time, and that’s when I set about writing something a little more serious. I invented a new character, Shader, and imbued him with a conflict that had plagued some of the Christian knights at the outset of the Second Crusade: How was it possible to be a Christian and to kill? Saint Bernard famously argued that killing the “infidel” wasn’t homicide, it was malicide, and so the matter was settled (cough).

This is the basic argument that has been put to Shader during his career as a cavalry officer, and he’s never been satisfied with it. It’s the dilemma upon which the whole series hinges.

Shader also has elements of Thomas Covenant in him, not so much “unbelief” in the Land and its people, but in his religion and his purpose. At times he is full of angst; at others, he compensates with violence bordering on insanity; but for the most part, he struggles to find a middle path, often going from one excess to the next.

Because of his inner conflict, Shader can be a fascinating protagonist, but he can also be a little frustrating. He’s a far cry from the usual confident sword-wielding hero, and he’s the polar opposite of the Nameless Dwarf, who has issues of his own, but is much more decisive, especially when it comes to smiting someone with an axe.

As to a favorite character in the Shader books, it’s a close call. The Nameless Dwarf almost upstages Shader in book 3, and Shadrak the Unseen (a diminutive assassin) is always fun to write, but overall, I think Ernst Cadman, the lich who disguises himself as an obese doctor, was the character I most enjoyed writing. His interior thoughts play against what he says to other characters, he’s witty, nostalgic, frightened, and driven to Faustian acts of recklessness because of his dread of oblivion.

In Shader, was the idea for the amazing post-apocalyptic earth and the fantasy world of Aethir already fully formed in your mind before writing or did it evolve as the story progressed?

I knew from the outset that Aethir was a world dreamed by the god-like character, the Cynocephalus, and that it was accessible to the indigenous race of Sahul on Earth/Urddynoor through mystical dream states. I began writing the story in Australia, so there are very real references to aboriginal beliefs.

I was also clear that this wasn’t fantasy in the traditional sense. It was set on our world very much like ours, only after a cataclysm known as The Reckoning. Science had reduced the old world to a dehumanized dog-eat-dog kind of a place, in which the last pocket of resistance was the island continent of Sahul and its shamanic culture. Eventually, even the Sahulians come under fire, and their only defense is to use an ancient artifact to unleash the nightmare creatures of the Dreaming (the world of Aethir) to devastate the world and end the culture of the prevailing technocracy.

That was all very much in place when I began writing the series. I developed a three-thousand-year timeline and detailed the mythology and major historical events, before situating each character within that timeline (bearing in mind that not a few characters in the series have been alive for hundreds of years).

The real challenge was to allow glimpses of the past to surface in the manner of an archeological dig without bringing them into the foreground at the expense of the current narrative.

Future plans for the Shader series?

My original plan was for there to be six books in the Shader series, but that all changed when I decided to write the complete Nameless Dwarf story arc. I looked again at the events of what was then Shader 4: The Archon’s Assassin, and saw very clearly that Deacon Shader had been reduced to a supportive subplot character, which he was to remain until book 6. It made sense, as I rewrote much of this material for Geas of the Black Axe (Legends of the Nameless Dwarf book 2), to remove Shader from the narrative, and the result was a much more focused story.

against the unweavingI have just finished writing two Shader origins novellas that obviate the need for much of the backstory in the series. I’m now in the process of adding about 80,000 new words to the series, which turns a lot of other backstory into part of a continuous narrative from when Shader leaves his role as Captain of the Seventh Horse and makes his first trip to Sahul, where he meets Rhiannon and the Gray Abbot for the first time.

This completes the Shader story arc from age seven up until the end of book 3, The Unweaving.

I plan to release a massive omnibus edition (both novellas and all three novels with this added material) as Templum Knight at some point in 2016. That’s one of the big positives about indie publishing and ebooks: no imposed word count.

After that, I want to make use of the deleted Shader and Rhiannon scenes from what was The Archon’s Assassin as the opening of what was originally going to be Book 6: Daughter of the Abyss. This will now be the sequel to Templum Knight, and will tie everything up very neatly.

I also have plans for a Shader swan-song novella.

Do you agree that The Nameless Dwarf is your most popular creation, and if so, why do you believe he has been embraced by so many fantasy lovers?

Yes, the Nameless Dwarf has definitely proven to be my most popular and most successful creation. A close rival is Shadrak the Unseen, who features a good deal in Legends of the Nameless Dwarf.

I think the reasons for Nameless’s popularity are manifold. He’s a complex character with vacillating moods, the potential for devastating bouts of violence, and yet he’s loyal, funny, and generally goodnatured. Despite his early falls from grace, which were largely out of his control, he has a strong sense of morality, and he’s someone who quickly earns the respect of virtually everyone who comes to know him. If you’re in a tight spot, Nameless is probably the one person you can rely on to get you out of it, or die trying.

In terms of the Nameless Dwarf books’ popularity, there are also a number of factors:
The books deploy several familiar fantasy tropes, which, despite what the “experts” say, are appealing to many readers of the genre, or at least those of us who grew up reading Sword and Sorcery, or the Heroic Fantasy of the 80s and 90s.

In my writing, however, I like to tinker with those tropes, and sometimes subvert them, so the Nameless Dwarf books are familiar but also new.

I think the blend of action, horror, tragedy, pathos, and humor has been a successful combination, at least according to the general flavor of the reviews. The books take the reader through a whole gamut of emotions, all of which ordinary people can identify with, despite the fantastical setting and events.

Another factor, one that led many readers to the books in the first place, was the artwork, particularly the iconic picture of the Nameless Dwarf on the cover of The Complete Chronicles, by Anton Kokarev.

Did you have any trepidation writing about a dwarf, as many modern fantasy readers seem to instantly dislike any story which includes elves, dwarves, or other “classic” fantasy races? Any reader backlash?

I didn’t have any trepidation writing the Nameless Dwarf books because they began as a spin-off from the much more human-centric Shader series. The first Nameless Dwarf standalone was a short story, so there wasn’t much hingeing on it. When the story became popular almost overnight, I wrote the rest of the initial series (which eventually became Revenge of the Lich) as episodes. As each installment received feedback from a core group of avid readers, I took what I learned from their likes and dislikes and put it into the subsequent episodes.

carnifexIt was only when I was signed by an agent and we began talking about pitching to publishers that I began to have concerns. Acquisitions editors are very circumspect creatures who tend to shy away from anything that doesn’t resemble a major bestseller of the last few years. Whilst I was aware there had been successful single race fantasy books at various times, most of the recent bestsellers were of the gritty, realistic kind, and had humans as the protagonists.

We pitched, nevertheless, and all but two out of fifteen top fantasy publishers loved the writing, the storytelling, and the characters, but they pointed out that dwarves (and single races generally) had waned in popularity.

The two publishers who didn’t seem to have an issue with dwarves requested an extension to the deadline I’d given them (not out of choice: I’d foregone editing work for the best part of a year in order to get these books written, and funds had all but run out). When they missed the extended deadline, I went ahead and self-published. So, I guess we’ll never know if my dwarf books could be successful in the world of traditional publishing, but they are doing extremely well as independently published books, thank the lords of shog.

One thing I hadn’t anticipated was that some casual browsers assume my Nameless Dwarf books must be “in the tradition of” Markus Heitz or the Gotrek and Felix Warhammer novels. The idea is a massive strawman. You might just as well say that because Shader is human, the Shader books are based on A Game of Thrones. I have never read Heitz (or GRRM, for that matter), and as for Warhammer, there was no such thing when I invented the Nameless Dwarf back in 1979/80. I recently had a look at a Gotrek novel, and the similarity ends with the fact that both characters have a beard and an axe.

In my opinion, there’s no harm using fantasy tropes, so long as you make them your own and tell your own unique story. Fantasy dwarves for me were little more than a point of departure. Actually, in the stories, we learn that the dwarves of Aethir were created by the Technocrat Sektis Gandaw to resemble the dwarves of mythology; and we later learn that Sektis Gandaw may not have been altogether truthful in that claim.

As with the worldbuilding, dwarves in my books are multi-layered and never quite what they seem. Readers and publishers who are superficial in their reading sometimes miss the irony and satire, then make themselves look daft trying to pontificate on what they see as fantasy cliche. Thankfully, the majority of my readers are astute enough to realize what the books are really about, and the majority of the publishers were, too. But that still does nothing to remove the animus some have against dwarves, or any other non-human races.

What I learnt from these near misses was that it would be career suicide to continue pitching single race books at this point in time. The positive, though, was that all but two publishers invited me to submit as soon as I have anything else ready.

Carnifex is a prequel to the original Nameless Dwarf series. Why go backwards in time instead of merely going further with the story you had already begun? What does the future hold for the series?

I was forever getting emails from readers wanting to read the story of the horrors Nameless committed at the ravine, and how he lost his name. This was all alluded to as backstory in the original books.

geas of the black axeInitially, I put off writing this material. For me, it was just a little too dark, and I was keen to show where the story went next.

I therefore wrote the follow up to the original Complete Chronicles, Return of the Dwarf Lords, which was the book that convinced my agent to take me on.

We immediately had discussions about which series to pitch first, Shader or Nameless, and both agreed on Nameless, purely on the strength of sales the Complete Chronicles had consistently shown. This meant we would need a complete story arc that didn’t require the reader to wade through Shader to fill in the gaps.

That’s when I went back to the origins of the Nameless Dwarf and wrote Carnifex. I then had to follow on with all the events from the Shader series with Nameless as the central character, and then add the scenes that were due to form Shader 5 (unwritten, and now never will be). This became Geas of the Black Axe (Legends of the Nameless Dwarf Book 2), which takes us up to the start of the original Complete Chronicles.

There are currently four books out in the series. The fourth ties things up nicely, but there’s an epilogue that suggests things are not going to end happily ever after. I have a few writing commitments to take care of this year, but if the series continues to sell well, I’ll start work on book 5: King of Arnoch, which will be followed by 6: Blood Feud, and 7: Civil War. The stories have already been sketched out in some detail. Civil War is set to be my final Nameless Dwarf novel.

Was the name “Carnifex” inspired by the California deathcore band of the same name? Or is it merely a coincidence?

I hadn’t heard of the band until I Google-searched Carnifex after the book had been released. I think it’s a cool association, though. You know, if their manager wants to talk with my agent, I’m sure we could come up with a pretty lucrative collaboration…
The name Carnifex comes form the Latin for “butcher” or “executioner”. In the story, it’s the name Droom Thane is told to give his second son by a homunculus (shifty little creatures of deception) who prophesies that through Droom’s sons, the dwarves will once more rise to greatness. Needless to say, never trust a homunculus…

While self publishing has many positive elements I’m sure it has many negative ones as well. What are the most bothersome things about being an indie writer for you personally?

I hate promoting, and for years I hardly did any. Occasionally, I would take out a Book Bub promotion, which took care of sales for a few months, and Amazon picked up The Complete Chronicles for a Kindle Daily Deal, which was nothing to sniff at. But mostly I relied on organic sales and word of mouth, and that worked out well for me.

revenge of the lich kingIt may sound crazy, but it’s only in the last few weeks that I’ve had a proper website, which is now the hub for all the books in their various formats. I’m also much more active on social media these days, primarily because the books are now my family’s primary source of income.

Over the years, I’ve built a fairly reasonable online footprint, largely through contributing to blogs, or being reviewed by fantasy bloggers. That, to me, is the only thing I have any direct control over: reaching out to bloggers and offering articles that lead people to my website, rather than directly advertising the books.

Obviously, there are a wealth of other factors that are beyond the writer’s control, and this for me is one of the frustrating things indies face. Online retailers have the power to “turn on the juice” for books whenever they wish, and this seems to be a somewhat arbitrary decision. I once woke up to find one of my books selling 150 copies a day at Barnes and Noble at $5.99. I had done no promotion, and I had never had more than a handful of daily sales from B&N. This went on inexplicably for a few weeks, then petered out. The same thing happens with Amazon from time to time, although my sales there are always respectable.

But it’s such a fickle game, and the algorithms are constantly changing. An indie writer can never simply sit back and enjoy the ride. You have to keep your finger on the pulse, and I would much rather be writing and doing other things with my life.

I’ve seen some writers who release their first book, don’t promote, and then that book sells thousands of copies in its first month. Others have written comparable (or even superior) books that no one ever sees. It’s that sense of lottery that can be frustrating in the indie field, but the only thing to be done about it is to write a lot, write well, put together a compelling blurb, get professional editing and a professional cover design, make sure it’s easy to buy your books in one place (website), and connect to your hub through social media. That way, you make it much more likely for organic sales to slowly build, and if the juice is suddenly switched on by the retailers, your pieces are all in place so you can make the most of it.

To me, covers are an integral part of selling any book, especially fantasy novels, so how does an author go about finding just the right cover artist and finding one he/she can afford? How much input do you have in the cover itself?

I always seem to go after covers I can’t afford and max out credit cards to get them!
A lot of writers search the portfolios of work on Deviantart, which is how I discovered Anton Kokarev. The first artist I worked with was Mike Nash, who I found via a Google search. More recently, Mike did the covers for Carnifex and Return of the Dwarf Lords, and Anton did Geas of the Black Axe and Revenge of the Lich.

If original artwork isn’t important to a writer, there are plenty of good reasonably priced cover designers. I’ve used Damonza.com for three recent novellas, and the results have been great.

As social media becomes more a part of an author’s role in publishing, how do you feel about that fact and how do you attempt to fulfill this growing job duty?

I’ve actually gotten to the stage that I enjoy social media more than I should. I’ve been contacted by a lot of supportive readers on Facebook and Twitter, and I’ve recently worked with various social media book promoters.

I’ve only really started using social media effectively in the last few months, and during the launch of Carnifex I was all over Twitter and Facebook for two weeks. The task now is for me to strike a balance in favor of writing and activities that don’t involve sitting in front of a computer, and to dedicate no more than an hour a day (if that) to social media.

I’ve been told by authors that attempting to sell a book to traditional publishers is nearly impossible unless you can say it is “Just like Joe Abercrombie” or “Similar to Brandon Sanderson” or something of that nature. Were they being truthful, and if so, how should authors attempt to get around this bias?

I was given this advice by an agent/editor/former publisher some years ago, and the same advice has been given to a number of my editing clients. There’s a degree of truth to it, but it’s probably not the whole truth.

return of the dwarf lordsI can only imagine the number of editors who receive submissions that “will appeal to readers of A Game of Thrones” who roll their eyes and toss the manuscript in the garbage.

The feeling I got from many of the publishers we recently queried is that it’s not quite so simple. There are trends they want to capitalize on, for sure, but they are also looking any shifts in what is popular and changes in the zeitgeist. Most editors are quite savvy people, and will be able to tell from your pitch and your first few pages if there’s a market for your kind of writing.

For me, I’ve learned that pitching to publishers is like gambling: only pitch what you can afford to do without for a very long time. Don’t do what I did and pitch a four-book series, then have to limit how long you’re going to leave it in the hands of editors because you need to start earning royalties to cover the mortgage!

In your opinion, has the ebook boom ended, or is there still room for new authors to make a name for themselves in the flood of self-published works?

The golden era for indie writers ended a few years ago. That was the period when you could get away with releasing a fairly good story, unedited, and with a reasonable cover that at least had some kind of picture on it. Some of the pioneers of indie publishing made a lot of money very quickly back then.

I came in on the tail end of that, as the boat was sailing off toward the Western Isles. Each year, it gets harder: quality is improving all the time, there is more and more competition, but most troubling is that the retailers (Amazon in particular) keep altering the landscape, and not always in the indie writer’s favor. It is much harder these days to get a break-out success, but they still happen now and then. All a writer can do is maximize their chances by doing the best they can with the elements they have under their control.

There is definitely still room for indie authors to make a name for themselves, and to make a living from their writing. Even on a bad month, my royalties pay more than my former job as a mental health nurse.

In terms of the general ebook boom, I’m hesitant to say that it’s over. I think the recent decline in overall ebook sales in relation to print has largely been due to mainstream publishers unrealistically inflating their prices. By pricing too high, publishers appear to be shooting themselves in the foot. Ebooks occupy a similar place to mass market paperbacks: they are more likely to be picked up by new or casual readers. Diehard fans will continue to pay whatever it costs for the early released hardback copy, but the broad spectrum of general readers are much more likely to wait for the cheaper paperback to come out, or the even cheaper ebook.

The problem is, publishers are often asking upwards of $14.95 for an ebook. Why would readers pay such exorbitant prices when they can read an indie fantasy book for between 99 cents and (typically) $4.99?

When you line up the best indie fantasy books alongside their trad. equivalents, there’s no appreciable difference in the quality of the storytelling or the editing.

What projects should fans be eagerly anticipating in the future?

The big project this year is a new fantasy novel set in a new world. It’s provisionally called The Codex of Her Scars, and it’s the first part of a proposed series called Snaith and Moonshine.

the seventh horseThe protagonist, Herrick Snaith, is a young man who wants to become a great warrior, but he is maimed in a horrific accident while trying to protect his wife-to-be, Tey Moonshine, who is also maimed.

Their clan has no use for the disfigured, and so they are apprenticed to sorcerers, or rather the charlatans who use trickery to keep the clans in check.

But Tey Moonshine has been covering up dark secrets that have plagued her since childhood, and she starts to develop abilities of her own, abilities that arouse the attention of a race so ancient they have been reduced to mythological bogey men.

When their island kingdom of Branikdür is invaded by the Helum Empire, the magic of their people is revealed for the sham it is, but the invaders have real sorcerous power that is as devastating as it is demonic.

And Herrick and Tey just can’t get enough of it.

This book should be finished by the end of summer, and will be doing the round of publishers, so I can’t predict when it will be available.

In the meantime, I’ll be finishing off Templum Knight, and just maybe I’ll start work on King of Arnoch, Legends of the Nameless Dwarf Book 5.

You can find out all about my books, listen to audiobook samples, and keep up to date with what’s next at: www.dpprior.com.

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ABOUT THE AUTHOR:

dp priorD.P. Prior is the bestselling fantasy author of the Nameless Dwarf and Shader series. He is represented by Laurie McLean, Fuse Literary.

Raised on a diet of old school Sword and Sorcery, and later influenced by the Heroic Fantasy of David Gemmell, the literary epics of Stephen R. Donaldson, and the “grimdark” offerings of Joe Abercrombie, Prior combines the imaginative daring of the old with the realism, tight point of view, and gallows humor of the new.

As well as being a prolific author, D.P.Prior is also an experienced fiction editor with an impressive portfolio of clients (http://homunculuseditingservices.blog…).

He has also worked as a personal trainer, and is a competing member of the US All-Round Weightlifting Association.

Subscribe to D.P. Prior’s New Release Mailing List for freebies and specials:http://eepurl.com/zacJT

Website: http://dpprior.blogspot.com
Twitter: @NamelessDwarf
Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/dpprior

Email D.P. Prior with comments, feedback, questions, and donations of wine: derekprior[at]yahoo.co.uk

Purchase D.P. Prior’s work at Amazon.

Shader series:
Ward of the Philosopher: Shader Origins
The Seventh Horse: Shader Origins
Against The Unweaving: The Entire Shader Trilogy
The Archon’s Assassin (Shader Book 4)

Legends of the Nameless Dwarf series:
The Nameless Dwarf: The Complete Chronicles
Carnifex (Legends of the Nameless Dwarf Book 1)
Geas of the Black Axe (Legends of the Nameless Dwarf Book 2)

Plague Demon series:
Husk (Plague Demon Chronicles Book 1)

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CARNIFEX

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Carnifex by D. P. Prior

Genre: Fantasy/ Sword and Sorcery

Series: Legends of the Nameless Dwarf #1

Publisher: Self Published (January 22, 2016)

Author Information: Website | Twitter 

Length: 250 pages

My Rating: 4 stars

Carnifex is a masterpiece of sword and sorcery storytelling. A visceral yet thoughtful epic of a dwarf (Carnifex), his people (the dwarfs of Arx Cravis), and a series of unusual occurrences which point toward an ominous future for our bearded protagonist. And whether you are already a fan of D.P. Prior’s Aethir books (ShaderThe Nameless Dwarf, and Husk) or a newcomer to the paradoxical world of Aethir, this novel is an amazing place to start your journey, because it is as smooth a sword and sorcery brew as has been concocted in many a year.

The story begins as most fantasy tales do these days – the middle. Well, not the middle, really, but rather someplace other than the beginning. I mean, beginnings are tedious affairs. That is why it is better to skip to the point in time when things get exciting – which is exactly where Mr. Prior starts this one.

Here Carnifex Thane is a fairly content Ravine Guard (i.e. City Guard) for Arx Gravis. He is still young (but not that young anymore), has a close relationship with his aged father and his older brother, and spends a considerable amount of time drinking with his closest friends. The majority of his life is the normal routine of work, home, and pubs. In fact, nothing exciting really happens in Carn’s life, because the dwarfs don’t allow anything unusual to occur; Arx Gravis being a tightly woven community, which lives by the unspoken mantra of peace, plenty, and no outside influences.

What do I mean by “no outside influences”? Simply put: non-dwarves aren’t welcomed in Arx Gravis. No traders. No visitors. No enemies (not that the dwarfs really have any). No foreign ideas. Everything is strictly monitored and controlled by the Council of Twelve; Arx Gravis’ most sacred tenant to maintain the status quo and, in doing so, keep mistakes from being made which might lead to a repeat of the distant past when a dwarf almost helped “unmake” all of reality!

But as Carnifex begins, usual things are beginning to happen, no matter the dwarves best efforts to ignore them. The catalyst to it all the arrival of the human philosopher, Aristodeus, who is an old, old friend of Carn’s family. Quickly, legendary nemesis after legendary nemesis of the dwarves arise. The people of Arx Gravis constantly confronted by the spectacle that the ancient stories of their people might actually be true. Their eternal efforts to remain in limbo leaving them ill prepared to defend themselves. People die. Defenders arise. Carninex among them. And all the while Aristodeus remains an active participant of the defense, denying any involvement in the occurrences, but warning of forthcoming horrors if ancient means of defense are not rediscovered!

And while the dwarven people deal with their tormentors, Carn deals with even more personal issues. His very stable personal life beginning to quickly unravel around him; the foundation of his world slowly crumbling away, driving him down a road toward a destiny which Aristodeus whispers is more terrible than he deserves.

As most of my readers know, I am a long time lover of sword and sorcery. I also adore dwarfs. Blame Michael Moorcock and J.R.R. Tolkien if you must, but those two iconic fantasy authors mesmerized me during my formative years, leaving an indelible mark on my reading habits. So I had no doubt when I picked up Mr. Prior’s Carnifex that I would enjoy it immensely. (Damn, look at that cover!)  But since many of you are not life long sword and sorcery fans, I imagine you’d like me to explain why you should try this novel out, and why you will enjoy it. To help me do this, I’ve decided to compile the

“Top Ten Reasons You Will Love Carnifex!”

10) Short, bearded guys running around going berserker on everyone, swinging around double-bladed axes which are almost as big as they are!

9) A mysterious human philosopher who seems to know too much and might be manipulating things behind the scenes!

8) A fierce dwarf fighter with a heart of gold but an ominous destiny foretold!

7) An amazing fantasy world, mixing classic fantasy elements with scifi elements! Map included!Aethirmap2

6) Mesmerizing mythos. Good gods. Bad gods. Even one whose nightmares become reality!

5) A delicious mixture of bloody fighting and ordinary life moments, where the characters develop into real people.

4) A well developed mystery which keeps you guessing until the very end.

3) Bedazzled dwarven ladies with ringlets and bows in their beards!

2) A fast paced narrative which is very smooth upon your reading palate!

1) The realization that the finale of this story promises every more amazing things to come!nameless dwarf

Hopefully, my top ten list has peaked your interest enough to pick up this novel.  Yes, I know sword and sorcery is an acquired taste, but I’d recommend that some of you begin your sampling of it with this tale.  If, however, this very eloquent and enthusiastic review hasn’t convinced you to do so, have no fear, because I already have book two of this series waiting on my e-reader and will be reviewing it soon!

Purchase the book at Amazon.

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GIVEAWAY: CARNIFEX

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Carnifex by D. P. Prior

Genre: Fantasy

Series: Legends of the Nameless Dwarf #1

Publisher: Self Published (January 22, 2016)

Author Information: Website | Twitter 

Length: 250 pages

For more than a thousand years, the dwarves have hidden away from the world in their ravine city of Arx Gravis.

Governed by an inflexible council whose sole aim is to avoid the errors of the past, the defining virtue of their society is that nothing should ever change.

But when the Scriptorium is broken into, and Ravine Guard Carnifex Thane sees a homunculus fleeing the scene of the crime, events are set in motion that will ensure nothing will ever be the same again.

Deception and death are coming to Arx Gravis.

The riddles that preceded Carnifex’s birth crystalize into a horrifying fate that inexorably closes in.

But it is in blood that legends are born, and redemption is sometimes seeded in the gravest of sins.

For Carnifex is destined to become the Ravine Butcher, before even that grim appellation is forever lost, along with everything that once defined him.

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D.P. Prior was nice enough to provide one signed copy of Carnifex for the winner of this giveaway and an audiobook of any of his extant works for the runner-up. North American residents only.

And the winners are . . . Dan Schwent (Winner) and Fred Holbrook (Runner-Up).

Yes, I’m sure that’s right.

No, I didn’t do a Steve Harvey.

Huh?  Yes, I can double check for you.

See, still the same.

God, dwarves, they are always bitching about something and waving battle axes around!

 

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FUN DAY MONDAY, OR THE BOOKS THAT WILL HELP ME SURVIVE THE WEEK AHEAD (February 15, 2016)

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The work week begins. I quickly slip into my business suit and head back into the office to save a few innocent people. But while I try to fool myself into being excited about the grind, deep down, I’m not, so I’m going to escape dreary reality by reading some great books.

Today, I’m setting off into two very different reading adventures!

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alcatraz v evil librariansAlcatraz vs The Evil Librarians by Brandon Sanderson

Genre: Fantasy – Teen

Series: Alcatraz #1

Publisher: Tor (February 16, 2016)

Author Information: Website | Twitter

Length: 320 pages

On his thirteenth birthday, foster child Alcatraz Smedry gets a bag of sand in the mail-his only inheritance from his father and mother. He soon learns that this is no ordinary bag of sand. It is quickly stolen by the cult of evil Librarians who are taking over the world by spreading misinformation and suppressing truth. Alcatraz must stop them, using the only weapon he has: an incredible talent for breaking things.

Purchase the books at Amazon.

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In the Shadow of the Gods by Rachel Dunne

Genre: Fantasy

Series: Bound Gods #1

Publisher: Harper Voyager (June 21, 2016)

Author Information: Twitter | Website

Length: 400 pages

Eons ago, a pair of gods known as the “Twins” grew powerful in the world of Fiatera, until the Divine Mother and Almighty Father exiled them, binding them deep in the earth. But the price of keeping the fire-lands safe is steep. To prevent these young gods from rising again, all twins in the land must be killed at birth, a safeguard that has worked, until now.

Trapped for centuries, the Twins are gathering their latent powers to break free and destroy the Parents for their tyranny—a fight between two generations of gods for control of the world and the mortals who dwell in it.

When the gods make war, only one side can be victorious. Joros, a mysterious and cunning priest, has devised a dangerous plan to win. Over eight years, he gathers a team of disparate fighters—Scal, a lost and damaged swordsman from the North; Vatri, a scarred priestess who claims to see the future in her fires; Anddyr, a drug-addled mage wandering between sanity and madness; and Rora and Aro, a pair of twins who have secretly survived beyond the reach of the law.

These warriors must learn to stand together against the unfathomable power of vengeful gods, to stop them from tearing down the sun . . . and plunging their world into darkness.

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CROSSING BEDLAM

The Rated-R Post-Apocalyptic Action Comedy Adventure is finally here!

Cover Art by Jon Hunsinger

Cover Art by Jon Hunsinger

The United States of America has been crippled. Violently contained by a global military force and left without its leaders, the country has become shattered and chaotic. A decade has passed since the first strike and a new landscape has emerged where survival is more important than anything else. Who will uncover the truth behind the attack and revive this once great nation?

It certainly won’t be Cassidy and Lloyd since they couldn’t care less about that stuff. She is a young woman on a mission to honor her mother’s dying wish, which is to toss her ashes off the Golden Gate Bridge. He is an infamous serial killer she broke out of Rikers Island since hiring a bodyguard wasn’t working out. Not the perfect plan, but having an insane, oddly charming murder-junkie on your side is a plus in the Shattered States.

Bullets and swear words are going to fly as Cassidy and Lloyd travel coast to coast, facing one challenge after another . . . including Nebraska.

Curious about this broken world & these two ‘not even close to being heroes’?

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Mark it as ‘To Read’ on Goodreads

Excerpt: A Relaxing Drive on the Parkway (Foul Language Warning)

The jeep hurtles through a large hole in the parkway divider, the threat of incoming traffic nothing more than a faded memory. Only three of their pursuers manage to follow with a fourth smashing into the gap and blocking the path. Not wanting to be an easy target, Cassidy keeps their vehicle swerving from one lane to another. She can hear bullets pinging off the asphalt and the abandoned cars that have been moved to the side of the road. There is another hole in the divider right before an overpass, so she drives through at the last second. Sliding into the tunnel, Cassidy watches the other vehicles pass the gap before making a tire-screeching U-turn to go in the opposite direction. Five motorcycles are heading toward them, but the heavy jeep and its driver’s refusal to get out of the way makes them an easily scattered threat. One of the bikers is unable to swerve to the side and he crashes onto the hood while his ride is sent spinning into an abandoned van.

“Get off my car!” Cassidy shouts as she reaches out the window. Grabbing the man by the ankle, she yanks him off the hood and lets him tumble into the concrete divider. “This is really going to cost me. Do you know what the penalty for your idiocy is? They kill you unless you escape to the mainland. Then you’re exiled until you find something that the Trade Barons want more than revenge. I don’t have time to go on a treasure hunt. Would you take off those sunglasses and stop humming car chase music?”

“I was only trying to complete the scene,” Lloyd argues as he calmly fires a pellet at a sedan driver. Having mixed the three types of ammo, he is happy to see a yellow orb burst on the woman’s mouth. “There’s the scratching. Now the nausea. We have a spinning and flipping car, folks. Oh, and there goes either the guy in the passenger seat or a really big ragdoll. You know, I’m starting to like what all of you have done with the place.”

“Stop killing people!” the blonde shouts, veering away from a large truck. She narrowly avoids slamming into a small car, the jeep moving off the road to complete the turn. “The more bodies we leave, the harder it will be to regain the Trade Barons’ favor. At least Neddy will send us what we need and . . . this is not the fucking time to change clothes!”

Lloyd stops with his head peeking out of his blood-covered shirt, which is high enough to reveal his scarred stomach. Figuring that he has come too far to stop, he yanks off the garment and hurls it out the window. He pouts when it flies over a car instead of covering the driver’s side of the windshield and causing a crash. Blindly reaching back, he takes a random shirt out of his bags and examines the black top in the side view mirror. The red and black mask of an old comic book character stares back at him, the face giving the illusion of grinning beneath the fabric.

“I remember reading this guy’s series before the Internet made him so popular and he turned up everywhere. Ugh, that sounded so pretentious that I’m tempted to stab myself. Hey, can we still see movies because I want to see his?” Lloyd asks while tying the laces of the black sneakers he hastily put on before making a mess at the Coliseum. “I really like t-shirts with pictures on them. They bring attention to what I’m wearing instead of my face. You can start a conversation about them too. Nice way to meet people and find out if they’re worth leaving alive or not. For example, I have a shirt with another hero and if somebody tells me that the bastard can defeat every other character then I know they have to die. I mean, he’s nothing more than a child-endangering bill-”

“Shut the fuck up, Lloyd!”

“Don’t be angry, kid. You’re doing great.”

“I can’t even figure out if we’re going in the right direction.”

“Turn around and start shooting at their tires.”

“I can’t because I need to save bullets.”

“For what?”

“Nebraska!”

Charles E YallowitzAbout the Author:

Charles Yallowitz was born and raised on Long Island, NY, but he has spent most of his life wandering his own imagination in a blissful haze. Occasionally, he would return from this world for the necessities such as food, showers, and Saturday morning cartoons. One day he returned from his imagination and decided he would share his stories with the world. After his wife decided that she was tired of hearing the same stories repeatedly, she convinced him that it would make more sense to follow his dream of being a fantasy author. So, locked within the house under orders to shut up and get to work, Charles brings you Legends of Windemere. He looks forward to sharing all of his stories with you, and his wife is happy he finally has someone else to play with.

Twitter: @cyallowitz
Facebook: Charles Yallowitz
Website: www.charleseyallowitz.com

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FIRST & ONLY

first & onlyFirst & Only by Dan Abnett

Genre: SciFi/Warhammer 40,000

Series: Gaunt’s Ghosts #1  

Publisher: Games Workshop  (January 1, 1999)

Author Info: Website | Twitter

Length: 288 pages

“Walk hardy and carry a bigger gun than anyone else” – the motto when reading Warhammer 40,000

Recently I decided to pick up First and Only by Dan Abnett as it has been some time since I read it and felt this was due a review (1999 I believe). Why? Mainly as it opened my eyes to the literature coming out from Games Workshop at the time. OK, the first novel I ever read was Wolf Rider which I believe was written by Jack Yeovil, but might be wrong there. The second novel was Horus Rising by Dan Abnett – what a brilliant piece of science fiction mangasm prose that was. Nostalgia; yes, a good way for me to sum up this re-read.

Essentially First and Only, like many books opening a series, is about setting the tone; who are Gaunt’s Ghosts, where did they come from, who is Commissar-Colonel Gaunt, how did he get to where he is now. That sort of thing. This is a great introduction to the dan abnettWarhammer 40k universe, as really, you don’t need to know anything about the canon or game – it’s mainly fluff anyway, so is unimportant to the literature (other than sticking to the canon – or what there was back then). This is where the early Games Workshop fiction comes into its own; the majority of lore was still developing and evolving (or just wasn’t introduced yet), which was great for the writers. They got to invent and introduce a multitude of ideas that are now either canon or still being used today by the current writers. Dan Abnett is heralded as one of the great writers and lore fathers for Games Workshop and Black Library – the publishing arm of GW. We’re call Dan Keeper of Lore it seems to fit. In later years some novels released by GW have been referred to as ‘Bolter Porn’ which basically means; lots of guns, lots of death, no real story. First and Only isn’t one of them. That’s for another time in another essay however.

The story revolves around Ibram Gaunt and his regiment of Imperial Guard named Gaunt’s Ghosts. Gaunt is both a political officer known as a commissar and has a battlefield command at the rank of colonel. Something rarely heard of, as the rolls clash with each other. Picture an old Russian commissar from World War 2 and an officer from said army, you will get some idea of the conflicting roll there. Gaunt’s catchphrase is always shouted when they are facing insurmountable odds – “Ghost’s, do you want to live forever?” You have to chuckle at that – a grimdark universe, fighting on all sides and then some nothing commissar dares to crack a joke! Humorous.

The story begins with a tasked patrol of warships attempting to retrieve a Vermillion level communication from the void. Essentially a astropath has to pin-point the signal, retrieve it and decode it. Think needle-in-a-haystack-in-space, that sort of thing. Somehow the signal finds itself in Gaunt’s hands via a date crystal. In-between this, Gaunt and his Ghosts have to fight a war on Fortis Binary and then onto Menazoid Epsilon – who are they fighting? Chaos Cultists, nutters, deluded, defiled and ensnared by the Chaos Gods to do their bidding. Talk about having no back bone as a person, sheez. Where are they fighting – in an area of conflicted space known as the Sabbatt Worlds.

Gaunt is a rare beast in Warhammer 40K, he is both likable, and at times, loathed at the same time. Which is ironic as the main push of the story involves inter-regimental rivalry between his Ghost’s and a fancy patrician regiment who is commanded by Flense, a most detestable suck-up. Gaunt is a leader, he inspires and make those who follow him aspire to be him. He cares for his men; he doesn’t waste their lives willy-nilly unlike Imperial Guard high command who essentially use them in a meat-grinder through a war of attrition. Tactically, that makes sense through a space-faring war. Individually, they don’t give a shit about some two-bit private who hasn’t got the right gear to do the jobs. Which is a prime example of what Warhammer 40,000 is about. Many times over Gaunt finds himself without the right tool. What he lacks for in that respect he makes up for in initiative.

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The story is really enjoyable, even with the immense conflicts and space travelling in-between, it stacks up as a flowing read. Not an easy task for a writer to achieve in 300 pages I can assure you. Mixed in with all the chaos and conflict is Gaunt’s past, which gets pulled up every so often. It’s rather a refreshing change of pace and certainly helps to slow down what is happening. Which is great, mainly due to the amount of characters being introduced – last time I counted (I got bored of it in the end) was 31 in the first 100 pages or so. That’s a lot, George R R Martin might struggle with that amount for the opening of Game of Thrones – who wins? I’ve no idea, let have a raffle.

Anyway, so yes, at times the story is a bit ‘jerky’ with that – but really doesn’t get confusing as the writing is smooth, precise and flowing with his narrative. It’s easy reading, for a military science fiction novel, that’s some remark for me to make.
What of his actual Ghost’s, there stealth specialist and good to have around in a pinch. Character wise, the series has been compared to Bernard Cornwell’s Sharpe series, which is a fair one in my opinion. Speaking of characters, some of the favourite are in Gaunt’s Ghosts; ‘Try Again’ Bragg (a bit slow, can’t hit a barn door), Milo (freakishly accurate with his sixth sense), Caffryn, Mkoll, Chief Medic Dorden (bitter but philosophical at the same time), Major Rawne – my personal favourite, mainly as he is the complete human being, flawed and brilliant.

If you want to venture out of that whole Star Trek sterilized universe (Why would space faring change our baser selves? It’s balls!) and into something more real and dark, give First and Only a thought, as the series just keeps on getting better and better. I mean who wants to live forever!

Contributed by Stuart West.border

About Stuart (In his own words):

hopliteStuart: Well I’m a contributor towards Bookwraiths content. When it comes to writing reviews I like to think I’m sat chatting with someone rather than at them; so my style can be conversational and abrasive at times. Read at your own peril!

In the 80s I grew up with books such as; The Famous Five and Secret Seven throw in an uncle who was obsessed with comics such as; The Beano, Topper, Asterix and Obelix, Batman and The Incredible Hulk.  You’ll get some idea of the adventures that I got up to.

I’m all about fiction that doesn’t hold any punches that gets stuck in and takes you on a ride where terminal velocity means your fingers are going to burn the pages as you turn them. Apply Aloe Vera where needed! Favourite current authors include (how long do you have?) Dan Abnett, Jame Clavell, Bernard Cornwell, Simon Scarrow and Anthony Ryan.

Outside of reading I’m a big fan of Rugby Union, I play and watch. I live in the United Kingdom and have two nephews to put through super heroes’ school. I’ve not told them I’m the anti-hero of the story yet.

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