KING’S WATCH (Volume 1)

kingswatchMy rating is 3 out of 5 stars.

This is one of those graphic novels that I read because I wasn’t in the mood for ultra-realistic, deeply complex or serious. Nope, I wanted something mindless to pass the time, introduce me to some new characters and have a little bit of harmless fun with. The graphic novel equivalent of a B movie, I guess, and with King’s Watch I got exactly what I was looking for.

Does that mean this was a star studded comic that dazzled me with its artwork or its stellar story?

Naw. Like the three stars shows, it was just an okay graphic novel, not anything more than that.

The main reason it is even a 3 star is due to the art. Honestly, Mark Laming impressed me. He showed a diverse range of abilities from penning some fairly ferocious monster men and magical spells to big battle scenes and normal day-to-day activities. Whether the characters were in the jungles of Africa or the urban jungles of America/Europe or space, I never felt anything looked out of place. Hell, he even did a good job of making the Phantom not look too corny, and that, my reader, is a damn hard task to accomplish. So anyway, the artwork was top notch in my opinion.

The problem with the graphic novel was simply the characters. Honestly, how was Jeff Parker going to come up with a dazzling story teaming up Flash Gordon, the Phantom, and Mandrake the Magician? Not to even mention who the main super villain turns out to be.

It might be possible, I guess, but it has got to be highly unlikely. I mean, let us look at our tremendous trio.

Tops on our list is Flash Gordon: a rich guy who is a great athlete and a brave dude but has absolutely zero super powers. How is he even involved in a group of supers trying to save the world? He wouldn’t be, but here he is at ground zero, trying to turn back an alien invasion on a global scale.

Then there is the Phantom. This is the Purple Shadow we are talking about here. You know, the guy who runs around in his striped underpants in the African jungle, lives in the Skull Cave, fights crime with his two pistols and rides into action on his white horse. Yet somehow, he gets pulled into a group of heroes fighting an interstellar invader. It seemed somewhat implausible, but whatever.

And finally, there is Mandrake, who was the only one of the group that really made sense being in this position. I mean, the Magician is a master of illusions, has been fighting against an international crime organization for years, and would probably try to stop his nemesis from unleashing a global invasion. Unfortunately, for everyone, the Mandrake is a horribly boring dude.

When you put these guys together, I honestly think Jeff Parker was given the most atrocious super team since the Legion of Super Pets, but even with such a tough draw, he gave it a decent go, crafting a story that – while not terribly realistic – made it, at least, sound plausible that these three would get together. He even kept the unrealistic concoction fun until the last few chapters when it sunk into the realm of nonsense, making even me begin to shake my head at the absolute ridiculousness of it all.

So anyway, to summarize, King’s Watch is like a decent B movie; it has some really pretty pictures, some bad characters, and an okay story, . Maybe, it isn’t great, but it is still very suitable to waste an hour or two following along with. I don’t regret reading it, and honestly, if the book did nothing else, it helped me not hate the Phantom as much as I did before. Don’t get me wrong, he still sucks, just not so bad now.

I received this book from Netgalley and Dynamite Entertainment in exchange for a fair and honest review. I’d like to thank both of them for allowing me to receive this review copy and inform everyone that the review you have read is my opinion alone.

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INTERVIEW: IGOR LJUBUNCIC, AUTHOR OF THE LOST WORDS

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How long have you been a fan of the fantasy genre?

I guess since I was ten or so. The moment I picked up The Hobbit and got hooked for life.

Who is your favorite author in the genre?

Uh-oh, that’s a tricky question. Mostly because time skews my perspective and taste. Furthermore, fantasy is not a single block of text and style, so it’s hard to judge the entire genre this way. But I really enjoy the works of Martin, Pratchett and Abercrombie. I hope that’s a fair answer.

What is your favorite book?

Another difficult one. Well, if I have to choose just one work, and ignore nostalgia and childhood illusions, then I would say Night Watch, by Terry Pratchett. It’s simply a book that touches you deep inside. You feel like you are part of a story, even though you know it’s just fantasy.

The best book you have read this year is ______?

So far, I’d have to say Wool, by Hugh Howey. True, it’s a novella, or even a novelette by some word count standard, but it’s also a magnificent piece of prose.

Are you a fan of grimdark fantasy?

Is there any other kind? Seriously, I think books should touch upon the tricky, unpleasant areas of humanity. If you cannot relate to the character, it’s boring. Grimdark actually means realistic, even though it may not be pretty.

If so, do you consider Joe Abercrombie, Mark Lawrence, or someone else the current master of the genre?

You may be surprised to hear (or rather, read) that I don’t think Joe or Mark write grim. Joe is cynical, Mark is somewhat brutal, but their topics are fairly easy to digest. I might be jaded, emotionally unavailable – I guess that’s the popular term – or just raised in a different culture slash mentality and to different standards, but I find myself enjoying and liking their books. No grimness there, no despodency, just solid fun. For me, the king of grimdark is Paul Kearney. If you’ve read The Monarchies of God and The Sea Beggars, there’s a guy who can squash the hope out of your soul.

Was there a certain book that made you decide you wanted to write a fantasy novel?

It’s hard to say. I’d like to believe that. But by the time I started writing fantasy, which was around the time I turned seventeen or so, I’ve probably read more than a hundred fantasy books. I guess it’s a combination of Tolkien, Jordan and Goodkind, at that time, who kind of paved the way for me.

What was the inspiration behind The Lost Words series?

I simply sat down and started writing. There was no critical mass of inspiration boiling in my head.

How long was The Betrayed floating around in your head before you actually put it down onto paper?

Probably seconds. Sorry for the corny answer. Now, I did take time elaborating the concept into a four-book series later on. That sure did some deep thinking. But the premise of the series was an instanenous, almost impulsive choice.

Do you consider The Lost Words series to be grimdark fantasy? Why or why not?

I think yes. And from the feedback I’ve received from my readers, definitely so. Most of the Amazon reviewers recommend keeping children away, and I agree. Some of the chapters can be a little grim. And it’s a rule that I make my wife cry at least once while reading each one of the four books, so there.
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There are a lot of serious themes regarding organized religion in the book. Did you ever worry that such deeply philosophical commentary would scare off readers?

I try to avoid preaching, because I don’t like it when ideas are shoved down your throat, or in this case, pushed into your eyes. There’s one particular chapter in The Betrayed where a character does get a bit fascistesque, but I hope I got away with it. Now, overall, I write for myself, for my own fun and pleasure. Otherwise, the whole exercise of writing and enjoying oneself loses the point.

How many books do have you tentatively planned in The Lost Words series?

The series is complete. It’s a four-book work. The second volume, The Broken, has been released in 2013. The Forgotten, the penultimate volumes comes out next month. And the last book is slated sometime for mid 2015. So if you like the books, don’t worry, it’s 100% done.

Is there anything you cut from The Betrayed prior to publication or something you later wished you would have done different?

As a perfectionist, there’s always something I wish I’ve done differently. It never ends. The whole point is to let go and make your future works better, smarter, smoother, more eloquent. My wife does the editing. She is fairly brutal and objective in her judgment, and she can yank entirely chapters out if she thinks they are unnecessary or stupid or anything of that sort. Small bits and pieces went out, but not too much. And I wouldn’t add. The mistakes of books past are the lessons for the books to be.

Which one of the characters in The Betrayed is most like you?

I really don’t know. All of them have a bit of me. But I try really hard to be apersonal and avoid having one character repeated over and over. Now, whether I succeeded, you tell me.

Did you use any historical leaders as the mold for the people in the book?

Yes. Oliver Cromwell was an inspiration. And some of the Russian tsars.

Do you love, hate, or feel indifferent to the major role social media plays in the success of novels in this era?

Mostly indifferent. It’s just another communication dimension. As a technical blogger for quite some time, I’ve found that you either use the media, or you don’t. But there’s no point fretting about it, fighting it, or trying to subvert your writing to match public expectations. Fun and self-truth first, everything else later, if at all.

How has the publication process treated you?

The Lost Words series is a self-published body of works, so that’s the one I should talk about. Simply put, I’ve learned a ton in the past two years. It’s amazing how much you can learn, even when it comes down to optimizing your publication package, working with artists, growing your following, and so forth. I have been working with CreateSpace, and overall, they are okay. I guess they do offer a slightly more comprehensive package than most other publishing houses, but you do sometimes feel you’re just a ticket number waiting its SLA in a mail queue. Still, I’m trying to learn and optimize. I’ve recently hired my own external artists for the cover work. I believe that most of the extras in publishing packages, like reviews and marketing and others, are completely unnecessary. Comprehensive editing and proofing is a must, though.

Any words of wisdom for aspiring fantasy authors?

Just write for your own sake. The glory and money will come later. Or they won’t, but at least you’ll be enjoying yourself. Did I mention you should be writing? A lot? All the time?

What is next for you in writing?

I’ve quite a few new ideas lined up. I’ve completed a gunpowder-era anti-hero book recently, and I will probably self-publish this next year. I’ve also finished the first volume in a first-person zombie-themed series. A novella really. I’ve also written about 35% of a Biblical fantasy book, which I will try to peddle to the traditional market. And I’m currently working on a modern fantasy book with an agent, and we will try to approach one of the big houses out there, but at the moment, I’m not at liberty to divulge any details yet. There’s an anthology coming, too, World War One, and it will feature a story of mine in there. Grimdark to the core. Finally, I’m also writing a technical book on Linux problem solving in high-performance compute environment, but by now, you’re all deeply bored. 🙂

ABOUT THE AUTHOR
IGORIgor Ljubuncic is a physicist by vocation and a Linux geek by profession. He is the founder and operator of the cool and highly popular website dedoimedo.com, where you can learn a lot about a lot. He really likes to write, particularly in the fantasy genre, and has been doing so since the tender age of ten summers. You can learn more at his blog.

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THE LOST WORDS GIVEAWAY

Igor Ljubuncic, author of the grimdark fantasy series The Lost Words, was nice enough to provide copies of the first two novels in his series to Bookwraiths for a giveaway.

And — DRUM ROLL PLEASE — David Goransson of Australia is the Winner. Congratulations, David! The books are in the mail. 🙂

For anyone else interested in this series, please read the about the books.

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In the ancient land of the Realms, where armies clash and heroes arise, only the most cunning and courageous can redeem a war torn land from certain annihilation. The Betrayed, Igor Ljubuncic’s epic, gritty fantasy novel, spins a searing tale of a world in the throes of war. With furious, fast-paced action and fascinating characters, this wildly inventive saga will thrill anyone who demands fantasy at the top of its game.

A war is brewing in the Realms. When the new religious sect of Feor from Caytor invades the Safe Territories, the home of the old gods, Commander Mali of Eracia scrambles to counter its advance. To that end, Adam, an Eracian prostitute who awaits hanging, is spared to join the army. In the Territories, a former criminal Ayrton and his young protégée Ewan face the threat of the invaders. Can the ruthless followers of Feor be stopped, and the old faith be saved?

As nations clash, old rivalries are set aflame and nothing seems sacred, sinister and ancient secrets are revealed. With wit and adrenalin, The Betrayed weaves a taut and textured landscape of warring factions, foes and allies, to deliver a full-on fantasy tale for the ages.

THE BROKEN

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Eighteen years after Adam defeated the Kingdom of Parus and proclaimed himself emperor of Athesia, he dies peacefully in his sleep. When his daughter Amalia crowns herself empress and takes nobles from neighboring Eracia and Caytor hostage, the political situation in the Realms is primed to explode. Meanwhile, exiled god Damian has resumed his quest to flee his eternal prison and kill the remaining gods. With Damian renewing his murderous quest and tensions boiling over in the Realms, the conflicts breathlessly march toward an overwhelming conclusion. Will Athesia prevail, or will it take a new leader to keep the empire intact? Will King Sergei of Parus be successful in his plans to avenge his family? Can Damian succeed in breaking the bonds of his imprisonment, or will he succumb to the one emotion he’s had all along? Bringing back the series’ signature tone and styling, the novel’s gritty realism, intense atmosphere, and intricate storyline make The Broken more than live up to the promise of The Betrayed. A harsh lesson in morality, The Broken will leave readers clamoring for more.

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THE BETRAYED

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The Betrayed by Igor Ljubuncic 

Genre: Fantasy -Grimdark

Series: The Lost Words #1

Publisher:  Self Published (April 1, 2012)

Author Information: Website 

Length:  384 pages

My Rating: 3 stars

The Betrayed is a grimdark fantasy that impresses in its scope, themes and ambitious narrative. Deftly juggling multiple main characters and plot lines, Igor Ljubuncic slowly creates an extraordinary world where religious ideology begets bloodthirsty wars, battles lead to sadistic violence, and the killing of humans begin to destroy the very gods. Written in a style distinctly its own, The Betrayed still reminds one of other grimdark fantasy penned by the likes of Mark Lawrence, Joe Abercrombie and Paul Kearney, where even the supposed “heroes” of the story are not so very different from the “villains.”

This gripping tale begins with the invasion of the Safe Territories by bloodthirsty armies. For centuries, this kingdom of the gods has been treated as sacrosanct by all its neighboring realms, off limits to their aggressions and lovingly cultivated as a place open to all gods and all people. Criminals are sent there to be changed into better people. Those disillusioned with life go there to start anew. And everyone is governed by the patriarchs, who dedicate their lives to spreading the love of the gods to their flocks. But now the fanatical leader of the god Feor sweeps into the peaceful land, putting everyone to the sword, burning and pillaging, and seemingly determined to wipe the Safe Territories, its people and the gods themselves from the face of the world

This unexpected and barbaric attack by the Feors takes all the realms by surprise, but they quickly respond. The Kingdom of Eracia sends its own army into the northern territories, and soon the King of Parus marches from the south into the land of the gods. Yet their appearance does little to halt the genocide there, for many of the powerful in both realms see the destruction of the Safe Territories as a way for their own kingdoms to gain more land and power. Quickly, all thoughts of saving the patriarchs is cast aside as a struggle to divide the realm of the gods ensues, and the war begins to spiral out of control, threatening to engulf the whole land in flames and forever transform the world.

As the blood flows and the divinity of the gods wanes, unexpected people begin to rise to prominence in the world. Individuals who would have died unknown vagrants or simple peasants begin to strut upon the world stage and control the fate of whole countries. The young prostitute Adam being one such person.

Convicted by the courts and sent to the army as his punishment, Adam finds himself trying to just survive. Soon, however, fate presents him an opportunity to rise higher than a man sentenced to death should ever hope for. But hidden behind his angelic facade and military genius, Adam has a heart that – if not completely black – is filled with so much pain and anger that neither enemies nor friends are safe from his wrath.

Seemingly a world away is Ayrton. A man who left behind his mass murdering ways when he entered the the Safe Territories. The patriarchs promised him a new lease on life; one where he could become something better than what he had been before. Where others merely pretended to change, Ayrton had truly done so, and when the Feors begin to destroy his new homeland, he joins the ragtag forces opposing them. Yet defeat after defeat and the realities of real war begins to make him doubt the very truths of his new life until he finds his feet set on a path to save the very existence of the gods.

And these are only two of the multi-faceted characters that Igor Ljubuncic gifts a reader with.

In The Betrayed, one will also be introduced to Ewan, a young priest from the Safe Territories, cast from his home by the war and slowly driven by divine inspiration to cross the ravaged lands for some unknown fate. Armin, a master investigator, who is hired to uncover the murderer of several important Caytorian businessmen only to find himself delving into the true nature of the god Feor and its fanatical leader. Mali, general of the Eracian army, who finds herself trying to harness the evil brilliance of Adam and ride it to victory without being destroyed by it herself. And so many more.

Without a doubt, The Betrayed is an undeniably well written novel that is thought provoking, fast paced, and full of dramatic action. It relies on its sweeping storyline and constant narrative shifts to create suspense and leave a reader thoughtfully introspective about the story’s serious themes. The characters are gritty and raw, the battles gory and realistic, and the atrocities of war and of sadistic people plainly described. However, unlike other grimdark authors, Igor Ljubuncic has not forgotten that no matter how deep the grimdark that there must be a hint of light for a great story to exist. For that reason, I thoroughly enjoyed The Betrayed and believe that fans of epic fantasy as well as grimdark will find this novel a satisfying read and a wonderful introduction to The Lost Words series.

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WAITING ON WEDNESDAY: VALOR (BOOK 2 OF THE FAITHFUL AND THE FALLEN) BY JOHN GWYNNE

“Waiting On” Wednesday is a weekly event, hosted by Jill over at Breaking the Spine, that spotlights upcoming releases that we’re eagerly anticipating.

My pre-publication “can’t-wait-to-read” selection is:

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Valor by John Gwynne
Paperback, 640 pages
Expected publication: July 22, 2014 by Orbit

From Amazon UK:

The Banished Lands are torn by war as the army of High King Nathair sweeps the realm challenging all who oppose his holy crusade. Allied with the manipulative Queen Rhin of Cambren, there are few who can stand against him. But Rhin is playing her own games and has her eyes on a far greater prize . . .

Left for dead – her kin have fled and her country is overrun with enemies – Cywen fights to survive. But any chance of escape is futile once Nathair and his disquieting advisor Calidus realize who she is. They have no intention of letting such a prize slip from their grasp. For she may be their one chance at killing the biggest threat to their power.

Meanwhile, the young warrior Corban flees from his conquered homeland with his exiled companions, heading for the only place that may offer them sanctuary. But to get there they must travel through Cambren, avoiding warbands, giants and the vicious wolven of the mountains. And all the while Corban struggles to become the man that everyone believes him to be – the Bright Star and saviour of the Banished Lands.

Embroiled in struggles for power and survival, the mortal world is unaware of the greatest threat of all. In the Otherworld, dark forces scheme to bring a host of the Fallen into the world of flesh to end the war with the Faithful, once and for all.

I read Malice (Book 1 of The Faithful and the Fallen) earlier this year, finding it a fun filled fantasy, and I can’t wait to see where Mr. Gwynne is going to go with this story.

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THE WOUNDED by JAMES A. MOORE (A SEVEN FORGES STORY)

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The Wounded by James A. Moore

Genre: Fantasy

Series: Seven Forges

Publisher: Self Published (November 4, 2013)

Author Information: Website | Twitter

Length: 13 pages

My Rating: 4 out of 5 stars.

The Wounded is a short story that follows Kallir Lundt: a minor character in Seven Forges who was mortally injured at the beginning of the book and never heard from again.

For those of you who have not read Seven Forges as of yet, the story told there focuses on Captain Merros Dulver, who is leading a small group of adventurers toward a range of unexplored mountains called the Seven Forges. The blasted lands that the group must transverse is a frozen wasteland, wind blasted, and devoid of life; facts that have made it an impenetrable barrier for anyone from the Empire of Fellein – which controls the majority of the known world – ever reaching these legendary peaks, let alone, exploring them. But, naturally, someone offered Merros a lot of money to come out of his well earned military retirement to do just that, so he and a handpicked group of people are freezing their butts off and wandering around in the wastes.

Soon, however, Captain Dulver realizes the Blasted Lands are not so uninhabited, as his band of adventurers is confronted by horrible beasts that come near to killing them and who horribly wound and disfigure one Kallir Lundt. Luckily, for Captain Dulver, an unknown race of people called the Sa’ba Taalor find them in the waste, lead them into their sheltered homeland in the Seven Forges and are seemingly happy to meet their unknown neighbors.

After becoming acquainted with one another, Captain Dulver’s band and a group of the Sa’ba Taalor leave the Seven Forges to travel back to the Fellein Empire. The plan to introduce these mysterious people to the rest of the world. Kallir is still drifting near unto death, however, and so he is left behind in the care of the Sa’ba Taalor, who claim that their gods can heal the mortally wounded man.

But what secrets are these unknown people hiding? Can they really heal Kallir from his mortal wounds? And even if they can, why are they doing so?

While this is a short story, it does a wonderful job of helping to answer those questions and reveal more about these interesting people called the Sa’ba Taalor and their mysterious homeland and culture. It also does an excellent job of introducing us to Kallir Lundt, who I believed was just another red shirt in a Star Trek episode, but who – after this tale and The Blasted Lands – seems to be a character who might play a bigger role in forthcoming books.

This one is recommended for fans of the series or those who have read Seven Forges. Other readers probably will not appreciate this unknown story of Kallir Lundt as much.

SEVEN FORGES SHORT STORIES
THE WOUNDED
SCARS

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FUN DAY MONDAY, OR THE BOOKS THAT WILL HELP ME SURVIVE THE WEEK AHEAD

Yeah, it is Monday again for me. Time to get back onto the old emplyment hamster wheel and run round and round. Maybe I’ll save the world this week, but I’d rather not have to today. The only thing that will help get me through the non-stop excitement of it all — besides my wonderful family, of course — are the books I will be reading this week. Hopefully, each of them will transport me to some awesome world where I can forget all about my grinding — though apprecaited –work week.

So without any further explanation, here are the books I will be reading this week.

CHASERS OF THE WIND by ALEXEY PEHOV

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Centuries after the disastrous War of the Necromancers, the Nabatorians, aligned with the evil necromancers of Sdis, mount an invasion of the Empire. Luk, a soldier, and Ga-Nor, a Northern barbarian, are thrown together as they attempt to escape the Nabatorian hordes and find their way back to their comrades.

Gray and Layan are a married couple, master thieves who are hiding out and trying to escape their former gang. They hope to evade the bounty hunters that hound them and retire to a faraway land in peace.

Tia is a powerful dark sorceress and one of The Damned—a group trying to take over the world and using the Nabatorian invasion as a diversion.

Unfortunately, for Gray and Layan, they unwittingly hold the key to a powerful magical weapon that could bring The Damned back to power.

Hounded by the killers on their trail and by the fearsome creatures sent by The Damned, Gray and Layan are aided by Luk and Ga-Nor—and Harold, the hero of The Chronicles of Siala. Realizing what’s at stake they decide that, against all odds, they must stop The Damned.

Chasers of the Wind is the first book in a new series from internationally bestselling author Alexey Pehov.

THE LEOPARD by K.V. JOHANSEN

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Part one of a two-book epic fantasy, set in a world as richly drawn as J.R.R. Tolkien’s Middle Earth, but with Mideastern and Eastern flavors

In the days of the first kings in the North, there were seven devils…

Ahjvar, the assassin known as the Leopard, wants only to die, to end the curse that binds him to a life of horror. Although he has no reason to trust the goddess Catairanach or her messenger Deyandara, fugitive heir to a murdered tribal queen, desperation leads him to accept her bargain: if he kills the mad prophet known as the Voice of Marakand, Catairanach will free him of his curse. Accompanying him on his mission is the one person he has let close to him in a lifetime of death, a runaway slave named Ghu. Ahj knows Ghu is far from the half-wit others think him, but in Marakand, the great city where the caravan roads of east and west meet, both will need to face the deepest secrets of their souls, if either is to survive the undying enemies who hunt them and find a way through the darkness that damns the Leopard.

To Marakand, too, come a Northron wanderer and her demon verrbjarn lover, carrying the obsidian sword Lakkariss, a weapon forged by the Old Great Gods to bring their justice to the seven devils who escaped the cold hells so long before.

Well those are my picks for this week. Why not let me know what you will be reading.

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SEVEN FORGES SHORT STORIES

The blog this week has spent a great deal of time focusing on the upcoming release of The Blasted Lands, the second book in the Seven Forges series, written by James A. Moore.

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While it is only a couple days (June 24, 2014) until The Blasted Lands will be released, I thought I’d share a few short stories that Mr. Moore has posted around the net to help Sa’ba Taalor fans get their fix. While anyone can enjoy these stories, I do believe they will mean much more to those of you who have read the first book in the series, Seven Forges, and already have some insight into these characters. Enjoy!

SEVEN FORGES SHORT STORIES
THE WOUNDED
SCARS

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“Scars” A Seven Forges Short Story by James A. Moore

This short story was originally posted by Mr. Moore over at his blog. Since I could not seem to get a link to work, I have copied “Scars” directly to the site. You can read more from Mr. Moore over at his blog GENREFIELD or at his author site JAMES MOORE BOOKS. In any event I hope you enjoy the story!

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Wollis March slipped from his furs and breathed a deep and sincere sigh of relief. The feel of fresh, cool air across his upper body was a blessing and he thanked his gods for it.
They had been traveling in the Blasted Lands for longer than he cared to think about. Instead of focusing on the long days of freezing weather and endless windstorms, he concentrated on the rewards awaiting them. There would be gold aplenty to share between the explorers.

Before that, however, there was the matter of getting back to the capital and presenting the maps of the area that had been given to them and introducing the Sa’ba Taalor to their employer. He looked over his shoulder as the strangers coming with them followed his example and peeled off layers of furs, leather cloaks and in many cases armor. The great beasts they rode on—he could not decide what sort of monsters they might be, but they were decidedly large and they had claws and fangs—let out a few grunts of approval and shook their bodies, knocking dust and grit out of their fur.

Wollis dismounted from his horse and winced at the flare of pain in his thigh. The scars were deep and the muscles had never quite come back as strong as he’d have liked. Still he could walk and that was a blessing.

It was time to stop for the day. The sun was setting and the cliffs facing them were too steep to attempt in the darkness. There were paths, yes, but they were treacherous even in the light and the men he traveled with and their guests alike carried far too many supplies to make the trek easily. They had to find the Temmis Pass, and that way was nearly perfectly hidden by the surrounding terrain. He would be able to find it tomorrow, he suspected, but not in the night.

He ordered the men to prepare for the rest and began the same duties himself. Within the hour everyone was done with their appointed tasks and the Sa’ba Taalor had several fires working. The strangers believed in cooking and eating meals together and they had invited him to join them. Though he did not speak their language they had done an amazing job of learning the common tongue during the travels, aided their apparent leader, Drask Silver Hand. Drask had gone ahead now, moving toward Fellein’s Summer City, Tyrne. According to tradition it was called the “Summer City” because the Emperors liked to spend the summer there, but the current ruler had not left his palace there in over seven years. It was the new capitol as far as Wollis could tell.

Tusk walked his way with several other members of his people, three women and two additional men. He barely recognized the giant without his skull-like helmet in place, but the scars on his arms were as good as the armor for singling him out. Each and every member of the gray-skinned people wore a veil to hide everything below their eyes, a demand of their gods, apparently. For whatever reason the Daxar Taalor did not believe Wollis or the rest of his people worthy of seeing the faces of their followers. It was best not to question the will of the gods. That much Wollis knew from his own people. And while most of them wore veils without any real decoration there were fine rings of metal covering most of the surface of Tusk’s veil that gave out minuscule ringing notes with each stride the man took. The Sa’ba Taalor had removed the extra layers and now wore what seemed the common clothes of their people, at least while traveling, a few wore tunics but all wore vests over their chests and trousers that they stuffed into their boots. Male or female didn’t seem to matter. It was oddly refreshing after a few of the places he’d been in the past.

Less refreshing were the weapons each of them seemed incapable of walking around without. To the last they carried swords or axes within easy reach of their hands. On the slim chance that their larger blades might suddenly fly away, there were spare daggers and a few smaller swords strapped to thighs or tucked into the edges of their boots. Fifteen years in the military and he’d never seen any lot more determined to carry weapons in his life.

Tusk pointed to the largest of the fires. “Join us for food?”

“I would be honored.” He smiled at the man. It seemed the safest way not to die a quick and painful death. Merros Dulver, his leader—now also heading off in a different direction on a separate mission—spoke clearly with the group and wanted the relationship they’d started to remain friendly and cordial. Wollis wanted exactly the same thing. Ehnole and Stastha were among the people with him. He recognized both of them even past the veils all of their people wore. Traveling with the Sa’ba Taalor had taught him one thing he had never consciously understood before: the way a body moves is as distinct as the face it bears. Tusk walked with a certain strut that stated for one and all that he was confident. Ehnole swayed her hips in an unconsciously seductive way. Stastha the younger, harder girl, moved like a phantom, her feet never seeming to touch the ground solidly so that she appeared to glide just above the surface rather than touching heavily. Despite her soft tread she managed to move with a cockiness that he found appealing. After months away from home and his wife, he found almost all of the females appealing.

Removing their clothing had revealed one thing about the Sa’ba Taalor above and beyond everything else. They were scarred. To the last of them they sported the signs of previous fights and a hard, violent life.

The meal was the last of the fresh meat the Sa’ba Taalor had provided by killing Pra-Moresh only a few days earlier. Despite his worries from the first invitation to eat with the strangers, Ehnole had proven a very capable cook and the heavy aromas of the spices and herbs she used to season the pungent meat made his stomach rumble.

They sat in companionable silence and feasted on meat and a few odd vegetables brought with them from the valley of the Seven Forges. And when they were done Tusk brought out a pouch of wine that was deceptively potent and tart enough to make lips pucker and eyelids squint.

One of the men around the fire said something in their tongue and made Ehnole chuckle. Wollis was not foolish. He had every suspicion the comment made had been about him and he chose to ignore it.

Ehnole looked to him and spoke softly. “Bromt does not understand the lack of scars on your body.”

He looked at the man who’d spoken. His body was heavy with muscle and his skin was heavier with scars of every sort. There were what looked like tooth marks running along one shoulder. Wollis could actually see the individual shapes of the teeth that had cut through the man. He didn’t begin to want to guess what sort of beast had made those marks in the first place.

Wollis was exactly drunk enough to answer, even knowing that he should approach all conversations here with caution. “I have always found the best way to deal with an attack is to not be where the attacker expects me to be.”

Tusk and the rest laughed and Bromt joined in when the words were translated. Wollis smiled and laughed as well, relaxing a bit. When you got right down to it, there were enough of the Sa’ba Taalor around him that if he accidentally offended them he’d probably be dead before he could regret it, so best just to enjoy himself.

Tusk spoke next. “You walk with a very serious limp. How did that happen, Wollis March?”

“I caught a spear in my leg.” He thought back to the moment so long before. The man with the spear came off a horse and brought the spear down with plans to drive it through his skull. He almost made it. “I dodged the worst of the attack. Man was aiming for my head, you see, but he caught me in the leg and the tip went through my muscles and bone and pinned me to the ground.”

The strangers nodded their heads.

“I’d be dead if not for Merros Dulver. He stood over me and fought off the rest of the attackers until additional soldiers arrived.”

“Did you kill the man who did that to you?” Ehnole asked the question.

“No. I was really very busy screaming. It hurt a great deal, you know.”

They seemed disappointed. And Wollis frowned. “Have any of you been severely injured?” He asked the question already knowing that the answer was yes and that he was being foolish.

Just the same Ehnole answered, “Yes. All of us.” She opened her tunic and bared her midriff, showing the light gray of her flesh and the darker gray of several of her scars. One long scar in particular was impossible to miss. It wrapped itself around her waist twice and slithered like a serpent.

“What happened there?”

“I tried to capture my mount. They must be caught, you see. They are not tame. We must tame them.” She pointed to the great creature where it lay not far away, looking toward the fire without moving beyond an occasional sigh or a shuffling of the enormous body to find a more comfortable spot on the ground. “Toratta did not want to be tamed. He fought me very hard. I had wrapped the trapping leathers three times around my waist to let me hold on better.” Her eyes smiled. The rest of her face, as always, was hidden away. “Some would say I held on too well, but I won my mount that day.”

“Where do your mounts come from? Are they in the same valley as your people?” Toratta looked in his direction the great eyes of the thing like lanterns in the growing darkness.

For a moment no one answered, and finally Tusk nodded his head. “They are from the Taalor Valley. But they are not bred by us. They are gifts from the gods.”

Wollis nodded his head, suspecting that he was touching against a subject the Sa’ba Taalor preferred not to discuss. He felt no particular need to push the matter. Instead he pointed to the scar on Bromt’s shoulder and chest. “And Bromt? Is that his name? How did that happen?”

Ehnole translated the question. And then she translated the answer as well. While he spoke, Bromt ran his finger over each individual tooth mark that permanently marred his flesh.

“There are things in the Blasted Lands. We do not see them often and most who do see them do not live to speak of it. I met one of them. It killed my first mount and bit most of the way through my arm before I killed it.”

“How did you kill it?”

“Well, it bit my arm as you can see. But it also swallowed my arm.” He mimed a mouth opening around his arm and swallowing the whole of it. And as he did so, Wollis could see that the tooth scars ran around the back of his shoulder as well. It had literally taken his entire arm into its mouth. “When it did that, it also swallowed my blade. So I cut it open from the inside and watched it bleed out.”

Wollis shook his head in wonder. The idea was unsettling.

“You really only have the one scar?” Ehnole seemed endlessly puzzled by the notion.

“Well, no. I have more scars, but they aren’t really very significant. I mean, I managed to nick my chin a few times when I was shaving. I’ve a long scar on my finger from when I cut myself when I was sharpening a sword blade and drinking. I’ve certainly never managed anything quite as spectacular as Bromt’s scar or yours. I can see more scars on Tusk than I would have thought possible for any man to survive.” He shrugged. “I’m afraid in comparison I’m rather disappointing.”

Tusk leaned forward. “Not at all. You are merely different. You avoid being cut. I can respect that. The followers of Wrommish use a similar principle in combat.”

“Wrommish is one of your gods?”

Tusk nodded. “Wrommish advocates using the body as a weapon. So the idea of not being struck makes sense. The hands and arms and legs are used to defend against weapons in combat.”

“How does a thing like that even work?” He’d seen plenty of brawls in his life but never once seen one that ended well when the brawler came up against armed men.

Tusk moved his hand in a back and forth motion. “The ones who don’t learn Wrommish’s ways early on seldom manage to learn it well.”

“I imagine that could be a problem, yes.”

He pointed to the south where several of his people had gone with Merros Dulver a day or so earlier. “Jost is traveling with your Captain. She is a strong follower of Wrommish. I have seen her block many weapons with only her hands.” He thought for a moment. “Drask as well.”

“I should think he has an advantage there, what with one hand being metal.” The words fairly jumped past his lips before he could stop them and Wollis had to resist the urge to slap his own hands over his mouth as soon as he was done speaking.

Tusk studied him for several moments. All around him the Sa’ba Taalor were deadly silent.
And then Tusk slapped him on the shoulder with one large hand and roared laughter. The rest joined in and Wollis relaxed. When they had calmed down a bit Tusk looked at him and shook his head. “Of course Drask might well kill you for saying that to him. It would depend on his mood.”

“I didn’t mean to offend….”

Tusk shook his head. “I take no offense. But I am not the one who had his hand cut off.”

“How does his hand work?”

Ehnole answered that one, “He was gifted by Ydramil.”

“Another of your gods?”

Ehnole nodded. “The Daxar Taalor each favor one metal. Well, except for Durhallem. But each favors one. And if they choose to favor someone who has lost a limb, it will always be made of that metal. There is no mistaking which god has granted a favor of that sort.”

“What makes them decide? I mean, do all of your people get replacements if they are wounded?”

“Not at all,” Tusk answered. “The Daxar Taalor choose who they reward very carefully. There are…conditions that must be met. If Drask had not performed to the satisfaction of Ydramil, he would not have been granted a new hand.”

“How do the gods decide?”

Tusk shook his head and leaned in closer. “How do gods decide anything? How do your gods offer rewards?”

“To be honest I have never spoken with my gods and they have never spoken with me.” He shrugged as he answered. “You and your people seem to have a better relationship with your gods than I have ever had with mine.”

Tusk shook his head and though little of his face could be seen behind the veil, Wollis sensed the pity the man felt for him.

To escape that irritating gaze he asked, “How did Drask lose his hand?”

“It was cut off in a duel.” Tusk swung one hand through the air in a chopping motion. “Do you have duels?” he looked closely at Wollis.

“We have formal challenges. They’re put before the magistrate or, if you’re in the capital city they are handled before the representatives of the Emperor.”

“We are not so formal. The man who attacked Drask made his accusations and drew his axe. Then when Drask stood to defend himself, the man cut his hand off.”

“What did Drask do to offend him?”

“I do not know. But Drask killed the man a moment later. The fool was already celebrating his victory.” Tusk shook his head. “Drask drove a knife through the man’s neck and finished the fight properly.” The man turned and called to his people in their own unsettling language—whenever the Sa’ba Taalor talked there was an odd resonance to their words but when they spoke their native tongue it was worse—and Wollis looked at the gathered group as they considered his words and finally the other woman with the group spoke up. Had he learned her name? He couldn’t remember.

Tusk nodded at her words and spoke again, “I could not remember what Ydramil demands. Drask would have taken the body of his defeated enemy into the Heart of Ydramil and made the body an offering. When he was done he would have held his wounded hand to the fires of Ydramil’s heart and asked for a new hand. The god must have accepted his offering, or he would not be alive now to carry on.”

Wollis nodded and considered those words carefully. “The heart of Ydramil, that is in the heart of the mountain?”

“Of course.”

“How did he get there?”

“Likely he walked. If Ydramil was feeling unkind he would have been made to crawl through one of the tunnels that leads to the heart of the mountain.” He paused for a moment and then continued. “The Daxar Taalor do not make it easy to ask favors of them, so he very likely had to crawl and drag his offering along behind him.”

Wollis considered the maps he’d seen and the mountains of the valley. Ydramil was far to the west in the valley, if he remembered properly. The mountains were as different from each other as their names. They were part of the same mountain range but no two looked at all the same. He imagined the climb would have been over harsh, broken stone with little by way of plant life along the sides and slopes. Scaling any part of the thing would be a challenge. Carrying another man’s weight? While missing a hand and bleeding? He doubted it was possible but chose not to say anything of the sort.

“When we lose hands, it is forever.” Wollis shrugged. “When my leg was injured three was no way to replace it. Nothing as impressive as Drask’s silver hand, so it was learn to walk with my injuries or sit for the rest of my life.”

Tusk nodded at him. “I think you made the right choice.” He placed his hands at the small of his back and bent backward, sighing. “My spine no longer enjoys sitting on my mount.”

The silence between them grew longer and Wollis yawned. It had been a long day. “We should find the Temmis Pass easily enough tomorrow. With good weather another two weeks will have us at our destination.”

“Your horses are slow,” Tusk spoke without criticism, merely making an observation. “But I look forward to seeing your Fellein.”

“Have you ever been away from the Seven Forges and the Blasted Lands before?”

Tusk looked toward the north and west, where even at this great a distance the light from the mountain range could be seen as a faint glow.

“Only once. We rode to the north of the Taalor Valley.”

“What did you find there?” Wollis had never considered that there would be anything beyond the Seven Forges. Really, the mountains had always seemed like the end of the world.

“Another time, Wollis March. It’s late. We should rest while we can.”

The man swatted him amiably on the shoulder one last time and strutted back toward where his tent was set up.

There would be no more answers that night.

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WORLD BUILDING: FELLEIN AND THE SEVEN FORGES BY JAMES A. MOORE

It’s a different sort of thing, building an entire world.

I mean, for me, as a horror writer, it was always a bit easier. Think of a situation and then either plop the characters into a real town or city or into a fictitious town or city in the real world. Sometimes a bit of both. In the Serenity Falls trilogy it was both. Most of the story took place in the imaginary town of Serenity Falls, but there were parts set in Manhattan and Chicago and a few other locations I’ve been to in my life.

See? Easy. You can wing that sort of thing and even cheat a little with a map if you feel the need. Making your own world is different. Even if I decide that I want to work in, say, early Medieval Europe as a foundation for the technology of the land, I have to work out additional aspects and a lot more of them than I originally considered.

In this world (or a close approximation where the author has added magic into the history) there are certain aspects that are still covered. People from England will have English names. There will be exceptions, of course, but mostly that’s a fair assessment. There might even be a few adjustments for time frame, but that can be sketchy. Everyone talks in thees and thous and the next thing you know, your readers are getting annoyed. I use that as an example because I actually ran across a fantasy book that did that once and it annoyed me exactly enough that I set the book down and never bothered again. That was long enough ago that I can’t even remember the book, but I can assure you I never bothered with that author again. I know that sounds harsh, and I certainly don’t like to hear it about my own writing (pretty much it happens to everyone sooner or later) but there it is. My money is precious to me and it was a lot more precious when I was in high school and scratched out enough money after school to keep me in comic books, books and the occasional movie.

Where were we? Oh, yeah, world building.

The thing is, you can get lost in that sort of detail. You can go crazy with names, especially if you’re doing historical twists on the real world. A thousand years ago the name Jesus Christ wasn’t pronounced the same way. I imagine most names weren’t. Go read some Shakespeare and see how much of that glorious prose is used in regular conversation and I think my point will be made. I think accessible characters and languages are important, because those are the exact things that used to tick me off as a reader. When an author gets so bogged down with details of name and culture and history that means nothing to the progression of the story that it snaps me out of my comfortable reading zone and makes me remember that I’m reading a book.

So that’s one of the serious issues I had when it came to building a new world.

Let me explain that a bit more if you will.
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I decided to make up a brand new world. I didn’t want ancient England or Greece or the Ivory Coast before it was called by that name. I wanted a new place, with new landmasses, new oceans, the whole nine yards.

Do you know what the problem with that is? If your answer is “No,” you aren’t alone. Neither did I.
We’ve touched on names. Listen, as much as I hate odd sounding names and locations and exotic titles that can yank me out of my reading zone, I also have an issue with barbarians named Phil, and common names for every new and exotic location. It’s a pet peeve of mine. It was also a serious challenge for me. I wanted the best of both worlds and that meant I had to make it work as best I can.

So let’s look at names. There are names and then there are titles. And you know what else? There are nicknames. They are not always the same things.

As an example let’s look at Tusk. Tusk is one of the Sa’ba Taalor, the bad guys of the Seven Forges story, at least from one perspective, and he is initially introduced simply as Tusk. Later we learn that his name is actually Tuskandru. Later still we learn that his full name and title is Tuskandru, Chosen of the Forge of Durhallem and Obsidian King. His friends get to call him Tusk. That’s enough for him. Rest assured, not all of the kings in the Seven Forges are that casual. Another quick example and we’ll move on from this particular subject. One of the other Sa’ba Taalor, one of the females of the species, is introduced as Swech. The character who meets her and contemplates her moniker isn’t sure if that’s her name or if it’s a nickname because she has dark gray hair and her name also means “Soot Hair.” In reality her full names is Swech Tothis Durwrae. As they are a rather casual people, she has no titles.

That is a total of two people from one nationality out of the dozen or so that have been introduced into the series so far.

See what I mean? There’s a lot more detail involved in the creation of a world than I thought there was at the beginning of this series.

The good news for me? I like doing this sort of thing. It’s fascinating.

Names have meaning. I’ve met several people from several different areas of Africa who all had very different names that had one thing in common: They are named after the day of the week when they were born. Apparently that’s a fairly common practice in parts of Africa. Not so much here in the US, but that’s part of what makes names fascinating for me. In parts of Europe for the longest time your name reflected your chosen profession or where you were born, depending on circumstances. The variables are nearly endless.

So too, the history of the world. We are all the products of our history to one extent or another. One person is born into wealth and power and trained to deal with the world in a certain way. Another is born into poverty and has to approach the world in an entirely different manner. One is given every advantage and trained to handle adversities. The other’s entire life might be adversity.Does the Empire allow slavery? Does the Empire condone or condemn the use of magic (We’ll get back to that one in a minute.)? How many gods exist? For Seven Forges, that last one is a doozy. Think about history for a second. Our world history. The whim of Emperor Constantine changed the way a sizeable portion of the world looked at theology. How? Constantine decided that the only legal religion would condone a single god. Monotheism. Allegedly he did this on a whim, because he found it less confusing. Imagine if he’d decided the only acceptable deities were the ones worshiped in Rome or Greece at that time. By a simple twist of fate or destiny or what have you, we not have Christianity as a driving force in many parts of the world.
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History impacts every part of the world you build and whether or not you use that history it’s best to have a grasp of it.

Geography is fascinating stuff, too. There but for a mountain pass that was properly defended by a hundred soldiers, a dozen legions might well overtake an entire country. Because it is well guarded, the land beyond remains safe as long as no one can figure out how to scale through the rugged mountains.

The area where vast treasures lay hidden might never be found if there isn’t a river running through the area, because everyone who tries to get there dies of thirst and their horses die, too. Back to history for a moment: once upon a time maybe there WAS a river there, but the source dried up or was diverted and now that hidden treasure is under a desert.

It all interconnects. The faith of a people can shape their traditions. The names they choose might well be taken from the names of their gods, the names of the ancestors, the job they do, the day they were born, the moon sign they were born under, the whim of a shaman or queen. The choice to be a farming community or a gathering of raiders might be decided by the weather conditions in an area, or whether or not the land is too rough to allow proper cultivation of the soil. The war between the Ape People of Durgoh and the Cat Folk of Chinei might come down to something as trivial as a cat person marking the wrong sacred tree and offending the devout ape person that saw the blasphemous act. For that matter, the name Durgoh might be an insult in the language of the Chinei and miscommunication might be all that is responsible for the skinning of hundreds of ape folk who never meant harm.

Building a world is a blast. But you have to know what you’re getting yourself into, don’t you? Before I wrote Seven Forges I have never been obligated to keep a lexicon of names. That lexicon is now several pages long and includes fifteen gods, several different locations and countries, and no less than five different peoples who do not always play nicely with each other. There is a history between these peoples and not even I know all of that yet because I don’t have to know all of it yet. I get to make it up as I go along, but it has to make sense, it has to be organic. If it isn’t, you can bet it won’t work out properly for me as the writer or for any potential readers.
They used to have an old saying on maps about what lay beyond the known territories and what might be out there. As a sign of potential danger they’d put “Here there be Dragons.”

Here there be Dragons, indeed.

Which, of course, is another consideration when you’re building a fantasy world. What sort of monsters do you want to have wandering the lonely, deserted places where travelers sometimes get lost? What names go on the maps to warn of the unknown?

In a lot of ways Seven Forges and the world of Fellein are foreign territory for me, too, and I’m loving the chance to explore.

Thanks for having me as a guest at Bookwraiths.com

James A. Moore

ABOUT THE AUTHOR
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James A Moore is the author of over twenty novels, including the critically acclaimed Fireworks, Under The Overtree, Blood Red, Deeper, the Serenity Falls trilogy (featuring his recurring anti-hero, Jonathan Crowley) and his most recent novels Blind Shadows as well as Seven Forges and the forthcoming sequel The Blasted Lands.

He has twice been nominated for the Bram Stoker Award and spent three years as an officer in the Horror Writers Association, first as Secretary and later as Vice President.

The author cut his teeth in the industry writing for Marvel Comics and authoring over twenty role-playing supplements for White Wolf Games, including Berlin by Night, Land of 1,000,000 Dreams and The Get of Fenris tribe. He also penned the White Wolf novels Vampire: House of Secrets and Werewolf: Hellstorm.

Moore’s first short story collection, Slices, sold out before ever seeing print.

He currently lives in the suburbs of Atlanta, Georgia. Meet him on his blog.

BE SURE TO CHECK OUT MY REVIEWS OF THE SEVEN FORGES SERIES
SEVEN FORGES (PART 1)
THE BLASTED LANDS (PART 2)

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