CIVIL BLOOD

Civil BloodCivil Blood by Mark Gelineau & Joe King

Genre: Fantasy

Series: Best Left in the Shadows #2 

Publisher: Self Published (April 15, 2016)

Author Information: Website | Twitter

Length: 54 pages

My Rating: 5 stars

Civil Blood is a story which surprised me, twisted me around, showed me I don’t always know what is going to happen, and made me love it.  That’s right, love it!

Okay, I realize some of you might point to my fanboy enthusiasm for all of the Echoes of the Ascended stories and imagine this is just more of that, but you’d be wrong.  Sure, Best Left in the Shadows was an entertaining fantasy romp (with a definite rom-com feel to it) that I enjoyed.  Yes, I do generally love everything Gelineau and King write.  However, Civil Blood is special; their best outing to date, in my opinion, turning this series about Alys and Dax into one not to be missed.

As this one begins, newly appointed Justicar Dax and Lowsider Alys have established a shaky partnership of sorts; both telling themselves it is strictly business and that their past romantic relationship will not impact what could be a win-win situation for them both: the new face of the royal law in Lowside (Dax of course) gaining insight into the Lowside criminal elements while Alys gets valuable info on the goings-on of the law, which she can sell to those very same criminal elements.  (Hey, I didn’t say this arrangement was logical.)

Things appear to be going fine between the two until the killings start in earnest.  Nothing unusual in people dying in Lowside.  It happens every day.  Crime wars erupting then flaming out on their own, leaving bodies spread around like leaves after a strong windstorm.  People just expect it, ignore it when it happens.  But this murder spree is different; someone torturing and killing the Cinderman’s fire crews, rousing this crime boss to action!  (I know, fire chief doesn’t sound scary, right?  Just try to picture a corrupt fire chief who has his own private army and requires regular payments to keep random fires from destroying your property.  Much scarier now.)

Quickly, the news of the murders finds its way to Alys’ ears.  A mutilated man having returned to the Cinderman and pointed his remaining fingers squarely at Alys as his torturer.  The enraged crime boss letting it be known he is coming for Alys’ blood!

Well, all this surprises Alys.  I mean, she knows she didn’t do these murders, so it begs the question “Who is trying to frame her for them?”  What bothers Alys the most is she doesn’t know the answer to the question, and she always knows.  It is her business to know everything of importance which happens in Lowside.  And so she sets out to uncover the identity of this person quickly, because no one fucks with her.  No one!

Meanwhile, Justicar Dax finds himself in a different type of trouble.  Family trouble.  Specifically, a friendly visit to the palace to visit his older brother, Marek, turning into a sibling inquisition.

Naturally, Alys is a big part of Marek’s obvious concern for Dax.  The older brother trying to gently remind Dax of what Alys did to him before and what she tried to do to their father.  Marek carefully warning that she is even more dangerous now, not to be trusted at all, because she is a part of the violent, corrupt, and treacherous world of Lowside; her loyalty more to Pious Black (criminal overlord of the city) than to any friend, even if Dax’s idealistic view of life and Alys wishes it was different.  And to show his worry is real, Marek even offers a contingent of bodyguards to guard his little brother — though Dax refuses, declaring that he has everything under control; everything is strictly business.

Once returned to Lowside though, Alys quickly asks Dax to help her deal with her personal problem with the Cinderman and get to the bottom of who is framing her.  Why she wants or needs Dax’s help for her plan isn’t clear. His position as Justicar not seeming to help her at all in this endeavor.  But the rather star-struck (Dax has it bad for her, even if he tries to hide it.) Justicar doesn’t ask any questions, just heads off into the unknown to help a woman he might not be able to trust completely.

What follows is a lightning quick story of criminal confrontations, old feelings, and rousing fights, which never slows down and never stops surprising.  The masterful glimpses of this couples history and their current feelings toward each other and their world transforming what appeared, at first glance, to be a simple rekindling of a forbidden relationship into a complex narrative filled with treachery and dark motives.  Each side of this partnership unsure of the other, dealing with remorse about the past, but filled with deep conviction, ready and willing to die in their own personal crusades.

Wow!  That was my feelings when I finished this second installment of the Best Left in the Shadows series.  My mind trying to come to grips with the noir-like atmosphere, the growing webs of lies and secret choices, the treachery which simmers just beneath the surface, and the growing understanding that Gelineau and King have so much more to reveal before this mesmerizing tale is done.

The only thing which sucks about Civil Blood is that I have to wait months for the next volume of this tale, which pains me almost as bad as having to wait however many more years before George R.R. Martin finishes The Winds of Winter.

I received this book from the authors and Netgalley in exchange for a fair and honest review. I’d like to thank both of them for allowing me to receive this review copy and inform everyone that the review you have read is my opinion alone.

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TOP TEN TUESDAY

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Welcome to Top Ten Tuesday! This is a weekly feature hosted by The Broke and the Bookish, where a new top ten list hits the web every week!

This week our topic is …

TEN OF THE MOST MEMORABLE BOOKS I’VE READ LATELY(GOOD & BAD)

THE GOOD!

dragon hunters5) Dragon Hunters by Marc Turner

After loving When the Heavens Fall, I was eagerly awaiting this book and expecting big things from it.  And it didn’t fail to deliver, telling an intricate tale of backstabbing political machinations which ran the gamut from the halls of power to the lowly police officer attempting to hunt down an assassin.  While you don’t have to read book one I personally would recommend it.

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carnifex4) Carnifex: A Portent of Blood by D. P. Prior

A sword and sorcery delight; this tale of a dwarf and his dark fate is filled with drunken laughter, bawdy comments, and enough double-bladed axe mayhem to satisfy any pure action lovers out there.   Just be warned though reading this book might turn you into a S & S lover.  The horror of it all!

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the lyre thief3) The Lyre Thief by Jennifer Fallon

Evoking the memory of classic fantasy books from days gone by, Jennifer Fallon delivered a masterful story filled with great characters, numerous plots, and entertaining progression, as this continuation of her Hythrun Chronicles grows that series into an even more epic, complex saga.

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black city saint2) Black City Saint by Richard A. Knaak

An urban fantasy set in Roaring Twenties Chicago, filled with mesmerizing moodiness, dazzling characters, and a gripping narrative.  This was a book I almost missed, but one which I will not forget now that I’ve given it a try.

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promise of blood1) Promise of Blood by Brian McClellan

I’m always late to most parties, and I definitely was tardy to the powder mage bandwagon heading out into fandom land, but now I’m trying to chase it down, because I really love this world and Mr. McClellan’s writing style.  Both are entrancing, which is why I can’t wait to continue reading along with the series.

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The Bad!

empire in black and gold5) Empire in Black and Gold by Adrian Tchaikovsky 

Perhaps it was the phase of the moon or the change of the seasons, but whatever the reason, this book and I never hit it off. I thought the prologue was great: combat, intrigue, deaths, and a hopeless fight against a powerful enemy, but then the main narrative began with two hundred pages of world building and four new main characters . . . and I lost complete interest.  Sad really, because that prologue was great.

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HALF THE WORLD4) Half the World by Joe Abercrombie

My second attempt to enjoy grimwhine didn’t work any better than my first.  Honestly, I shouldn’t have been surprised after not adoring Half a King, but I seem to have this undeniable need to keep throwing myself at Abercrombie books hoping this one will finally turn me into a fan of Lord Grimwhine.  Who knows, maybe, Half a War will be the one to hit the sweet spot.  Yeah, it’s on my bookshelf waiting to be read.  *Hangs head in shame*

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a crown for cold silver3) A Crown for Cold Silver by Alex Marshall

When I first popped this one open and read a few chapters, I would never have imagined it appearing on “The Bad!” section of this list.  I mean, I was loving my introduction to this world and its grimdark characters, then it took a nosedive which I won’t go into again . . . because it depresses me how much I was disappointed when I closed this novel.  Oh, well, maybe the next book will fix everything.  Hope springs eternal, right?

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READY PLAYER ONE2) Ready Player One by Ernest Cline 

For a child of the Eighties like me, this seemed like a can’t miss book, filled with pop culture references to the decade which shaped my life and which gave me (and all of us) such great pop icons.  Unfortunately, before I got to the end of this one, I had grown weary of it and the Eighties tributes.  Who knew I could get sick of my favorite decade?

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snakewood1) Snakewood by Adrian Selby

I’m sure this novel owes its top spot on this list to the fact that I only recently read it.  Naturally, my bibliophile angst has not had time to dissipated down to a reasonable level.  Be that as it may though, I can’t emphasize how much I was looking forward to reading this novel, and how much it disappointed me.  Hopefully, others enjoyed it more than me.

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BLACK CITY SAINT

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Black City Saint by Richard A. Knaak

Genre: Urban Fantasy

Series: Black City Saint #1

Publisher: Pyr (March 1, 2016)

Author Information: Website | Twitter

Length: 390 pages

My Rating: 4 stars

Roaring Twenties Chicago.  Prohibition gangsters like Al Capone rule the streets.  Dirty politicians walk the halls of power.  Flappers fill the dance halls.  Model- Ts roar along city avenues.  Radios blare out Jazz music.   Tommie guns bark out street justice.  And the gate between the mortal realm and Feirie lies hidden by it all, guarded by its sixteen hundred year old guardian.

This gatekeeper named Nick Medea is a strange, complicated man.  On one hand, he lives a simple, solitary life as an exorcist of sorts.  Only those with real problems with Feirie creatures able to contact him; his fee to rid these individuals of their specters zero.  But his real job is far more serious, more important, more dangerous than hunting ghosts, as he stands alone between the world of Feirie and mankind; his eternal duty to keep the gate closed, because if the magical gateway ever opens it will destroy the modern world, crashing civilization back to the Dark Ages.

But Nick isn’t completely alone.  There are a group of near constant companions who aid him along the way.

Most of these are outcast Feiries, trapped on the mortal plane.  Fetch is the one who spends the most time with the eternal guardian.  This lycanthrope posing as the gatekeeper’s faithful dog, albeit one who talks whenever he has the occasion (in a mixture of archaic Feirie and Twenties slang no less) and is more powerful than anyone would ever guess.  Krayavik is the other; a humanoid Feirie who has converted to Christianity, spending his life posing as a priest in a catholic church, where his real duties remain a mystery for quite some time.

Nick Medea also has a ghostly haunt who appears to him whenever he enters upon holy ground.  This specter is none other than the Roman Emperor Diocletian, who has been cursed to spend an eternity atoning for some sin or another, something related to Nick Medea’s execution sixteen centuries prior.  And while he continually offers advice to and questions our gatekeeper’s actions, his relationship with Nick is strained at best.

The strangest and most powerful of Nick Medea’s cohorts, however, is the spirit of an ancient dragon.  Centuries ago, Nick killed this creature, but in the process his and the dragon’s spirits became fused together.  Their union a disagreeable one at best; the dragon granting Nick access to many amazing abilities while ever seeking o take control of their shared body and unleash destruction upon the world.

As Black City Saint opens, Nick and Fetch are attending to an ordinary exorcism.  An older lady finding that ghosts are haunting her attic, causing her cats to disappear.  These spirits turn out to be far worse that the lady, or even Nick Medea, initially suspected, being creatures of Feirie, and to vanquish them, Nick is forced to rely heavily on the dragon’s powers as well as the aid of Fetch.

Quickly, though, matters take a turn for the worst.  A new client contacting Nick.  This terrified young lady seeking help with her supernatural problem.  Nothing out of the ordinary there, but when Nick meets this lady, our gatekeeper is shocked to find she is the reincarnation of his ancient beloved Cleolinda, who is destined (or cursed) to continually be reborn, enter his life, and die again . . . over and over again.

If this wasn’t enough to unnerve even an eternal guardian, Nick discovers that his reborn love is an unknowing pawn of a “Wyld” of Feirie: the darkest of the Feirie folk and the most feared adversaries.  This particular one the most powerful and deadliest of them all; someone who should be dead, burned in the dragon’s flames fifty years prior when he almost succeeded in opening the  gate.  How he survived and how he remained hidden so long perplexes Nick, but why Oberon has hidden on the mortal plane all this time terrifies Nick, because when the King of Feirie determines to unleash hell on earth even Saint George and his dragon  (Oh, yes, that is who Nick really is.) know fear!

Now, I’m not an urban fantasy expert like many of my reading friends.  Sure, I’ve tried the Dresden Files, The Iron Druid Chronicles, and Justis Fearson to name a few, and I’ve enjoyed them all, but I don’t think four or five reads has turned me into an aficionado of the genre.  But what I am is a really critical reader, who demands entertaining stories, and with this in mind, I have to say that I loved Black City Saint.

Why I loved it is really simple: great characters, interesting plot, and an amazing setting.

For me, characters are the most important feature of any book.  Without compelling ones, even the greatest stories will not work.  And in Black City Saint, Mr. Knaak has gifted readers with a bevy of compelling ones.  Every characters pulling you in, engaging you in their current trials and mesmerizing you with their past travails.  They are interesting, complex, and thoroughly developed by Mr. Knaak (though, like all good authors, he holds some things back for future stories.)  Nick Medea, obviously, gets the most love; his murky past gradually unveiled in interesting snippets, while his actions speak louder than words in his current situation; but his complex, symbiotic relationship with a dragon was the winning ingredient for me, turning him into an amazing lead.  Fetch really was a close second however.  Our resident, talking lycanthrope livening up any scene he was in.  (Guess I just love wisecracking dog-like creatures.  Sorry, Oberon, you have competition now.)  Coming in last for me was Nick’s reincarnated love Cleolinda, whose tough, competent personality made her more than a damsel in distress, though this modern Twenties lady really didn’t get the chance to strut her full stuff in this tale.

As for the plot itself, it was a multi-threaded masterpiece, beginning with the simple exorcism and slowly building into a multi-dimensional tour de force of Feirie mayhem.  Mr. Knaak’s brilliant use of sub-plots and shadowy mysteries definitely added a compelling undertone to  the ongoing action-packed narrative, and his portrayal of the devious Oberon with his cunning and complex plots made every story revelation important and every scene count as you attempt to deduce where this tale is heading.

And that setting.  Well, I really can’t emphasize enough how great it was to read about Roaring Twenties Chicago.  This era in American history has always interested me; the narrative of a society gripped by monumental societal change peaking my interest (especially since I already know the Great Depression and World War II is right around the corner to dash everyone’s dreams of a new, better future for the world.)  And while Mr. Knaak doesn’t turn Black City Saint into a history lesson, he crafts the picture of this time so lovingly, so expertly that it all comes to life before your eyes, reminding me very much of a far different novel about the same time period: The Great Gatsby.

Black City Saint is, without a doubt, the best urban fantasy novel which I personally have read.  Great characters, interesting plot, and a fully developed setting turning this tale into a real page turner.  Probably there were a few missteps along the way from the beginning to the end, but I didn’t notice them, because I was too engaged in Nick Medea and his friends trying to keep Oberon from destroying the world.  And that my friends means this was a damn fine story.

I received this book from Pyr in exchange for a fair and honest review. I’d like to thank the publisher for allowing me to receive this review copy and inform everyone that the review you have read is my opinion alone.

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ALCATRAZ VERSUS THE EVIL LIBRARIANS

alcatraz v evil librariansAlcatraz versus the Evil Librarians by          Brandon Sanderson

Genre: Fantasy — Middle Grades/Young Adult

Series: Alcatraz #1

Publisher: Starscape (February 16, 2016)

Author Information: Website | Twitter

Length: 320 pages

My Rating: 4 stars

The first adventure in the young adult fantasy series Alcatraz The Evil Librarians was one which I and my youngest son read as a bedtime story.  As a fan of Rick Riordan’s Percy Jackson series and Mac Barnett’s Brixton Brothers mysteries, I knew the novel was a can’t miss with the little Bookwraith, and I wasn’t wrong.  This fast-paced, funny tale by Brandon Sanderson bringing more than a few smiles to my face and eliciting many a hysterical giggle from my son, which meant it was great fun but didn’t really put him to sleep any faster.

In this story, foster child Alcatraz Smedry is our star.  Like most thirteen year olds, he has more than a little teen angst going on, but Alcatraz has more than a little right to feel that way, because he has had a pretty rough life: losing his parents, moving from foster home to foster home, and being cursed with a knack to break almost anything.  And when he gets a bag of sand in the mail for his birthday, his angst only grows, as it seems this is his only inheritance from his mom and dad.

Soon, though, Alcatraz learns that there is a lot more to this stupid bag of sand than he thought.  A cult of evil Librarians (who plan on taking over the world by distorting the truth) stealing it from him, trying to shot him before a strange, old man in a modified Model T-Ford slams his car into the side of Alcatraz’s house.

Grandpa Smedry not only saves Alcatraz but opens his eyes to a whole new world.  A place where the Free Kingdoms are waging a hidden war against the Evil Librarians, and Alcatraz’s inheritance of a bag of sand is the most powerful gift anyone could have ever been given.  (It took Alcatraz’s dad his whole life to gather the Sands of Rashid one grain at a time!)  The Librarians wanting the sands, because with them they will be able to create the most powerful Oculatory Distortions ever, giving them the power to finally overthrow the Free Kingdoms!

Well, at least, Grandpa Smedry says all this is true.  Alcatraz isn’t really sure if he believes him or not, especially the part about him being his grandpa.  So what is he to do: run off into unknown danger with a strange man who might be delusional or head off to another foster home?

Finally, our young orphan decides, telling Grandpa Smedry, “I’m only going with you because someone just tried to kill me.  You see, I’m a somewhat reckless boy and not always prone to carefully considering the consequences of my actions.

But how will the odd pair retrieve the sands from the armed and dangerous Librarians?

Grandpa Smedry has the answer though: They will use Alcatraz’s Smedry talent.  The talent (not a curse at all) to break things.  The most powerful Smedry talent ever!

Lighthearted, funny, and filled with wild, crazy ideas sure to delight everyone who has the heart of a child, Alcatraz versus the Evil Librarians shows a very different side of Brandon Sanderson, but it still displays all his amazing storytelling talents: amazing plot, interesting characters, and mesmerizing twists and turns, which means it is a story not to be missed.

I received this book from the Starscape Books in exchange for a fair and honest review. I’d like to thank the publishers for allowing me to receive this review copy and inform everyone that the review you have read is my opinion alone.

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STACKING THE SHELVES, VOL. 21

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Stacking the Shelves over at Tynga’s Reviews is all about sharing the books you are adding to your shelves, whether it be physically or virtually. This means you can include books you buy in physical store or online, books you borrow from friends or the library, review books, gifts and of course ebooks!

Well, this week I’ve had the good fortune to stumble upon a great used bookstore and receive an ARC.

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the crimson campaignThe Crimson Campaign by Brian McClellan

Genre: Fantasy — Flintlock

Series: Powder Mage #2

Publisher:  Orbit (May 6, 2014)

Author Information: Website | Twitter 

Length:  608 pages

When invasion looms… Tamas’s invasion of Kez ends in disaster when a Kez counter-offensive leaves him cut off behind enemy lines with only a fraction of his army, no supplies, and no hope of reinforcements. Drastically outnumbered and pursued by the enemy’s best, he must lead his men on a reckless march through northern Kez to safety, and back over the mountains so that he can defend his country from an angry god, Kresimir.

But the threats are closer to home…
In Adro, Inspector Adamat wants only to rescue his wife. To do so he must track down and confront the evil Lord Vetas. He has questions for Vetas concerning his enigmatic master, but the answers will lead Adamat on a darker journey.

Who will lead the charge?
Tamas’s generals bicker among themselves, the brigades lose ground every day beneath the Kez onslaught, and Kresimir wants the head of the man who shot him in the eye. With Tamas and his powder cabal presumed dead, Taniel Two-shot finds himself as the last line of defense against Kresimir’s advancing army.

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nightshadesNightshades by Melissa F. Olson

Genre: Urban Fantasy

Series: Stand Alone

Publisher:  Tor (July 19, 2016)

Author Information: Website | Twitter 

Length:  176 pages

Alex McKenna is the new Special Agent in Charge of the Chicago office of the Bureau of Paranormal Investigations—the division tasked with investigating crimes involving shades.

Or vampires, as they’re more widely known.

Children have been going missing, and agents are routinely being slaughtered. It’s up to McKenna, and some unlikely allies, to get to the bottom of the problem, and find the kids before it’s too late.

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BEST LEFT IN THE SHADOWS

best left in the shadowsBest Left in the Shadows by Mark Gelineau &          Joe King

Genre: Fantasy

Series: Best Left in the Shadows #1 

Publisher: Self Published (November 15, 2015)

Author Information: Website | Twitter

Length: 80 pages

My Rating: 3.5 stars

Another highly entertaining entry into the Echoes of the Ascended novellas series by Mark Gelineau and Joe King,  Best Left in the Shadows proves yet again these authors have big plans for their fantasy world, are talented enough to fulfill those dreams, and are far from a one trick pony, as each series is a unique story all its own.

Here Alys is a tough, streetsmart Lowsider.  Selling secrets to the various gangs and crime bosses of the seedy underside of the capital has given her a comfortable life and made her a respected member of the underworld.  Nor does it hurt that Alys is more than capable and more than willing to cut a throat or two whenever the need arises.  So, when an old lover knocks on her door needing help with a delicate situation, she agrees . . . for a price.

In fact, Magistrate Inspector Daxton Ellis is investigating a murder.  Not that another body showing up in Lowside is anything special.  It happens everyday after all.  What has sent Dax slumming in the undesirable section of town (and asking help of Alys of all people) is that the corpse in question was of a true blood girl: a direct descendant of the First Ascended.  And when the children of important people die (especially in Lowside) someone is going to pay.

The investigation which follows is a twisting, turning affair, filled with lies, schemes, and tension.  The aristocratic and idealistic Dax quickly finding himself out of his element, led into the hidden sanctums of crime lords, shadowy brothels, and neck-deep in a community filled with desperate, downtrodden people who would be more than happy to kill him — if he wasn’t being protected by Alys.  And through it all, our unlikely team uncovers more than a few secrets, heals some old wounds, and discover than old feelings (even juvenile love) does not completely abandon us even when we are old enough to know better.

Descriptions for why I thoroughly enjoyed this novella are too numerous to list, but I’ll try to just keep it brief.

  1. Interesting characters who also happen to have chemistry.  (Yeah, this is a fantasy romantic comedy, and Gelineau and King do pull it off.)
  2. Yet another brush stroke in the amazing portrait of the Echoes of the Ascended world, which further develops this complex land.
  3. A tight mystery plot which delivers twists, more than enough action, and many comedic moments.

All of which meant I flew through Best Left in the Shadows during my free time last night (You know, after the wife and kids are asleep.), and I can’t wait to follow along with Alys and Dax’s continuing adventures.

I received this book from the authors and Netgalley in exchange for a fair and honest review. I’d like to thank both of them for allowing me to receive this review copy and inform everyone that the review you have read is my opinion alone.

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The Wheel of Osheim Writing Contest

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This post is to announce a flash-fiction writing contest, where you can win a signed (or dedicated) Advance Reading Copy of Mark Lawrence’s highly anticipated new novel:

THE WHEEL OF OSHEIM

 which is provided as prize for this competition byACE Books

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The Rules:

Submit your entry, which is no longer than 300 words (without title)  and features the words ‘life’ and ‘death’ below.

The competition closes on 11th April 2016.  All entries will be posted HERE.

Judges of this competition are as follows:

MARK LAWRENCE

DAVID JACKSON

PETER NEWMAN

JOHN GWYNNE

SARAH CHORN

T.O. MUNRO

This is an international competition, open to everyone.

Please note: You won’t receive an automated email notification after submitting your entry. I will upload it onto the site as soon as I will have the time, which might be straight away, but might be just hours later…

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INDIE WEDNESDAY: THE COMING STORM

Indie-WednesdayAlong my reading journey, I’ve made a conscious decision to not only read the books on the shelves at my local Barnes & Nobles store, or online at Amazon, but to also try self-published, or indie, works as often as I can.

Now, I know several of you are snickering in the background or rolling your eyes at my idiot crusade to bring a few good indie works to light. And, believe me, I understand why you’d do that. Several years into this, I have to admit that I’ve probably stopped reading more indie stories than I’ve finished, but if I don’t share those triumphs and failure, then no one else will know whether these self-published stories are worth investing their time into or not.

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The Coming Storm by Valerie Douglas

Genre: Fantasy

Series: The Coming Storm #1

Publisher: Self-published (April 13, 2011)

Author Information: WebsiteTwitter

Length: 798 pages

My Rating: 2 out of 5 stars.

Hundreds of years ago, the Wizard War tore apart the world, as mad sorcerers tortured innumerable captives to gain blood magic by which they augmented their powers to godlike levels.  Their madness driving the world to the brink of destruction.

To defend themselves, a grand alliance of humans, elves, and dwarves sprang into existence; the evil wizards eventually destroyed – except for a handful who escaped into the dark lands, passing out of knowledge.

And so, peace returned to the realms; a near universal tranquility broken only by political machinations at the High King’s court and the constant patrol of the dark border, where tireless human and elven warriors hunt down the occasional dark interloper.  All seems well with the world . . . until the unthinkable happens!

In the Elven hold of Aerilann, Elon, advisor to the High King of Men, is filled with feelings of uneasy; his magic whispering to him of a wrongness in the land. His unease sending him off into the wilds to track the dark things venturing into the border lands. His only companions on this quest of discovery his true-friend Colath, Jareth, a human wizard, and Jalila, Elven archer. But even this band of wise adventurers finds it hard to read the signs of the coming disaster.

Meanwhile, Ailith, heir to Riverford, resides in her father’s highland kingdom.  A tomboyish girl, more likely to ride out to hunt dark creatures with her father’s hunters than to dress in frilly gowns and read poetry, she is the apple of her parents’ eyes; King Geric and her mother Selah adoring their only daughter as only parents of a single child can.

Then, unexpectedly, things change in Ailith’s once loving home. A new man, Tolan, appears at the castle, taking up an advisory position with King Geric; the once even-tempered and jovial king transforming into a strange caricature of himself.  When Ailith turns to her once strong-willed mother for understanding, she finds Queen Selah engulfed in a malaise as well, unable to do aught except stay in her rooms in a trance-like state. Left adrift and alone in a world turned mad, the princess begins her own quest to discover what has changed her parents; a quest that will change her life and place her very soul at risk.

Sounds good so far, doesn’t it? Maybe a bit too Tolkienish for some but still a good premise for an engaging story.  And the fact of the matter is — for all the criticisms you can make about editing or writing style — the first half of the book is a good read. The story draws you in, and the characters (especially Ailith for me) made me care about them and want to see where their differing quests led them. But then something just goes wrong with the book.

When a book goes wrong, it’s like a cake recipe not turning out just right. Did the baker not put enough sugar in? Maybe too much? Was an ingredient left out? That is the way I view a good book turning out not quite right, and that is the way I view The Coming Storm: there are a few ingredients that just didn’t mesh well.

First, there was too much action. The characters would go here, fight these dark creatures, then discover this new piece of the puzzle that leads them to travel to yet another place to fight more creatures. It got to the point I just skipped the action scenes because they did
nothing to actually move the story forward.

Second, one of the main character evolves too quickly from powerless to powerful. I understand that it is common fodder in fantasy books that hobbits find magic ring or farm boys discover magic sword, but those type of stories only work where the main character struggles along the way with the power. In The Coming Storm, one character stumbles onto power after power whenever that particular power is most needed to overcome an obstacle. The other character’s response to this amazing string of luck something along the lines of “Well, I really like Steve, so while it’s really weird he has gotten the ability to transmute stone right after he got those amazing fighting abilities I guess he is just lucky like that.”

Third, the powerless character (The one who discovers all these magical talents) also turns from a follower into a leader. A leader whom other more powerful and more experienced people instantaneously wish to defer to. When you add to this the fact that the character turns from ordinary looking into this regal, beautiful creature seemingly between pages, you might begin to understand why this whole transformation just did not ring true.

Fourth, the main characters continue making these mind numbing decisions that throw them into danger; some of which just do not make any sense. The main one that kept popping up in my head was why this group of important people continued to travel around by themselves. Honestly, once you’ve identified there is a danger and that an enemy is after you, wouldn’t you go get a group of soldiers or even hunters to accompany you around as protection or something?  I really believe you would, which is why every time they’d ride off into danger I’d think to myself “Really?  They are doing this again!”

Fifth, the elves are given too much deference.  I personally love elves, having been raised on Tolkien’s version of these mystical beings, but here these guys are treated like the wisest, most infallible beings ever created.  The constant fawning of everyone over them really got annoying after a while.

Even with all these issues, I still found The Coming Storm a story filled with lots of things to appreciate.  Definitely, it could use a good bit of editing, some rewriting to jettison the overpowered character issue, and maybe a plot tweaking here or there, but it still delivers an entertaining tale, which many would thoroughly enjoy — especially those who prefer their fantasy slanted more toward romance.  Personally, I would give the first half of the book a solid three (3) star rating, while the second half dipped down to a one (1) star.  But give it a try and see what you think of it.

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TOP TEN TUESDAY

TOP TEN TUESDAYS

Welcome to Top Ten Tuesday! This is a weekly feature hosted by The Broke and the Bookish, where a new top ten list hits the web every week!

This week our topic is …

Ten Book Series I Love But Feel Like I Haven’t Talked About Enough

CLASH OF EAGLES10. Clash of Eagles Trilogy by Alan Smale

All lovers of alternate history should pick up this story of Roman general Gaius Marcellinus, who leads an army to explore and conquer the newly discovered North America.  Things don’t go quite as planned in Rome though, leading to Gaius becoming a prisoner to the native population and having to trade his knowledge of Roman technology and skills (specifically fighting tactics) to his captors in return for a new lease on life.

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promise of blood9) The Powder Mage Series by Brian McClellan

I’m putting this flintlock fantasy series on here because it is one I’ve enjoyed so far and desperately want to continue with.  (Nope, I haven’t finished it yet, but I did just buy The Crimson Campaign this weekend.)  Why?  Powder mages, flintlock muskets, French Revolution-esque storylines, and loads of great characters.  It really is a great series.

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city of stairs8) The Divine Cities by Robert Jackson Bennett

Mr. Bennett’s series, so far, has taken readers to two cities upon the Continent: a place where the gods once lived, using their magic to create magical realities to suit their whims.  And while the gods were destroyed years ago, there are still vestiges of their divine handiwork remaining in isolated places across the land, which leads to some interesting sleuthing, pulse-pounding action, and more than a few head scratching moments as you try to keep up with this amazing story.

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the garden of stone7) Echoes of Empire by Mark T. Barnes

Filled with great idea after great idea, this trilogy also has more than a few amazing characters to keep you interested as the story evolves into a vicious civil war between the ancient dynasties of the Great Houses and the Hundred Families that rule the land. All of the mayhem sparked by one man’s lust for power and a desire to cheat death.  It is really entertaining.  Go pick it up.

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Beyond Redemption Cover with blurb6) Beyond Redemption by Michael R. Fletcher

A mesmerizing magical system where delusions shape reality.  A cast of characters who run the gamut from vile to just despicable.  A story which revolves around the creation of a god.  Mr. Fletcher mixes it all together to concoct a grimdark delight which will entertain even while it shocks.

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SEVENFORGES5) Seven Forges by James A. Moore

Sword and sorcery stories are a guilty pleasure for me.  A taste I acquired at a very early age from reading authors like Michael Moorcock and Robert E. Howard, and even today, I get excited when I can dig into a good one.  All of which brings me to Seven Forges; the best sword and sorcery series going right now, in my opinion.

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when the ehavens fall 24) Chronicle of the Exile by Marc Turner

Reminding some of Steven Erikson’s The Malazan Book of the Fallen, Marc Turner’s sweeping epic jumps from one pulse-pounding story to another with new casts of characters who live in the same world, are impacted by the same events, but are as different as shells on the seashore.  And that is what makes the series so fun to read, because you never know where Mr. Turner is going to take you this time.

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THE GRIM COMPANY3) The Grim Company by Luke Scull

Now, some people like to say this series is too similar to Joe Abercrombie’s grimdark classic The First Law, but to me, all resemblances are irrelevant, because Luke Scull does something here that Lord Grimdark never did in his series: make the grimness fun.  Don’t believe me?  Read it and see what I’m talking about.

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traitor's blade2) Greatcoats by Sebastien de Castell

The grimdark Three Musketeers is what some have dubbed this swashbuckling epic.  I suppose there is some truth in that description.  However, the Greatcoats series is much more than just that.  Rather, it is a brilliant epic, filled with mesmerizing characters, epic plots, and more than a few monumental twists and turns.  Which is why you already had it on your “to be read” list, right?

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SCOURGE OF THE BETRAYER1) Bloodsounder’s Arc by Jeff Salyards

Mr. Salyards starts this grimdark trilogy off slowly and meticulously, immersing you in the life of the young scribe Arki as he takes a position with a band of Syldoon soldier lead by Captain Killcoin.  In book two and three, the tale picks up speed and transforms into an epic grimdark tour de force; one which I was very sad to see end.  And now you can experience it too, just go find the series and purchase it wherever fine grimdark books are sold.

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FUN DAY MONDAY, OR THE BOOKS THAT WILL HELP ME SURVIVE THE WEEK AHEAD (MARCH 21, 2016)

funday-Monday

The work week begins. I quickly slip into my business suit and head back into the office to save a few innocent people. But while I try to fool myself into being excited about the grind, deep down, I’m not, so I’m going to escape dreary reality by reading some great books.

Up this week is a novel I began last year before losing my way and setting it aside as well as a novella I was looking to finish last week.  (There just never seems to be enough hours in the day to get everything done.)

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prince of foolsPrince of Fools by Mark Lawrence

Genre: Fantasy – Grimdark

Series: The Red Queen’s War #1

Publisher: Ace (June 3, 2014)

Author Information: Website | Twitter

Length: 355 pages

The Red Queen is old but the kings of the Broken Empire dread her like no other. For all her reign, she has fought the long war, contested in secret, against the powers that stand behind nations, for higher stakes than land or gold. Her greatest weapon is The Silent Sister—unseen by most and unspoken of by all.

The Red Queen’s grandson, Prince Jalan Kendeth—drinker, gambler, seducer of women—is one who can see The Silent Sister. Tenth in line for the throne and content with his role as a minor royal, he pretends that the hideous crone is not there. But war is coming. Witnesses claim an undead army is on the march, and the Red Queen has called on her family to defend the realm. Jal thinks it’s all a rumor—nothing that will affect him—but he is wrong.

After escaping a death trap set by the Silent Sister, Jal finds his fate magically intertwined with a fierce Norse warrior. As the two undertake a journey across the Empire to undo the spell, encountering grave dangers, willing women, and an upstart prince named Jorg Ancrath along the way, Jalan gradually catches a glimmer of the truth: he and the Norseman are but pieces in a game, part of a series of moves in the long war—and the Red Queen controls the board.

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A Whisper of Southern Lights by Tim Lebbon

Genre: Dark Fantasy

Series: Assassin #3

Publisher: Tor (May 10, 2016)

Author Information: Twitter | Website 

Length: 96 pages

Death and destruction follow the demon wherever he treads, and Gabriel is rarely far behind, waiting for his chance to extinguish the creature known as Temple once and for all.

But in Singapore during the Second World War, a lone soldier in possession of a shattering secret gets caught up in their battle. The knowledge he holds could change the course of their ancient conflict… and the fate of the world.

A Whisper of Southern Lights is a standalone tale in the Assassins series by Tim Lebbon.

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